|Reviews for Disgaea: Dawn of a new Darkness|
| my 2 guys chapter 12 . 3/3
that was good keep the chapters coming
| killer4853 chapter 12 . 9/18/2015
| Guest chapter 7 . 4/12/2015
Nice story, certainly a new idea I haven't seen before.
Though, I do have one question. I remember the fake Zenon being only level 90, even though he was technically an Overlord. Are you using the same scale as the actual Disgaea games?
| Locothehood chapter 12 . 3/29/2015
Well it was a fun read thereisonething ihopeyouwillstopdoingasithasgivenme quitetheheadache mainly what you read just moments ago plus ittalics i like ittalics but my eyes are weak when there bunched up like that
that aside the story is quit involveing tho i wonder how hinnata will take it after her first black Sabbath well considering how a succubus would typically lose controll to thier lustfull natrue when that time came.
as for an alistor i can't even begin to figure out how he came to terms of not haveing a body so soon. but then again he did sorta see himself as a weapon so its not much of a leap.
i tend to read as much as is out there before i review. so grammar as im doing this on my cellphone
keep up the good work
a demonic orrochimaru would be quite truoble some but at the same time redundant since he wants immotality and that would be a perfect shortcut he might even stop being so evil in his shock.
just thought id share an idea you can use it if you like as i have little tallent for as a writer but im good for ideas
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/25/2014
Pretty nice start, read first two chapters in one go. This is going to be pretty AU; not that I mind, might I add, but you'll probably be hearing about it from the less... intelligent... reviewers. Ignore those idiots; you can't please everybody all the time, and if they're stupid enough to continue reading what they don't like, they're not worth worrying about.
Please write more, I see the latest update is a few months back.
| EliteSlayer103 chapter 12 . 1/23/2014
Ugh another sakura hater.
| uscias chapter 12 . 11/6/2013
Please update soon.
| gohan90 chapter 5 . 10/22/2013
I love the idea of a disgaea and Naruto crossover story so I am disappointed that this seems to have been abandoned since it has not been updated in over a your. I hope you do something similar in the future sometime or come back to this at some point.
There are a few things I don't like about the story, mainly that Hinata is paired with Naruto, she is a terrible choice for a demon naruto character.
| Petin Naahl chapter 12 . 10/15/2013
loving the story so far, still I should mention that in chapter 10 you lost the spaces between the words when your characters were thinking. Looking forward to chapter 13, and then the rest as well.
| WeissKnight99 chapter 2 . 5/21/2013
Oh gawd, this is a whole motherfucking new level of awesome...
| Rizaidym chapter 9 . 3/28/2013
...Fuck. Zabuza is now immortal. After all, Kubikiri Bocho is a sword that cannot be damaged permanently. AWESOME.
| Rizaidym chapter 7 . 3/28/2013
Hmmm. Where is Baal on this scale?
| Rizaidym chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
Inshou? Zan'ei? (Pulls out DS and boots up Megaman Zero Collection)
| Grey Muji chapter 12 . 3/21/2013
Hmm, it's okay.
| Ethorin chapter 8 . 2/28/2013
I am guessing the inspiration behind Azure Wing is the "Little Cricket" from Men in Black
oh god that gun was hilarious