I really enjoyed this.

Hi there! Just finished reading this a few days ago, and I would like to say that I enjoyed this fan fiction a lot! I’ll be sure to reread it again, that’s how good it is! The ending is very wholesome, in my opinion anyway. I like the idea of Tak being Dib’s next challenging student. Maybe, when you get the time, you can have a sequel based on how Dib worked with Tak. I enjoyed every chapter. The climax was amazing too, and I really loved how Gaz managed to calm Zim down when he was going to self-destruct. The scene where Dib was caught, and Zim having a complete meltdown was amazing too. I could feel how Dib felt for making such a mistake. He was acting much more mature in this story, and took things in a more serious matter. Basically, I loved everything. I hope that you’re doing alright in your life, considering that I read this four years after the fic was completed. Just know that your work is amazing, and it always will be.

love the ending especially when Zim got a job with Membrane Labs and that you left it open for a sequel

hope their is one cause seeing Dib tackle Tak well also having Zim suddenly appear for a meeting because he misses Dib would be awesome

Gaz swooped in like an angel of darkness and doom and save the day

knew that reading Zim's journal would end bad but not use P.E.G to blow up the city bad

Dib for the love of your non squid brain turn around and step AWAY from the journal

red flags Zim raised some red flags in this chapter

awww Dib's rewards to Zim were so sweet

Dib handled Zim like a pro in this chapter and I kinda want him and the Tallest to have another 'chat' and see Dib go all protective over Zim

kinda hoping that Gaz and Zim will bond about video games

and if she ever finds out he's an alien I can defiantly see Gaz picking Zim's brain to find the scariest aliens or planets he knows for her gaming work

Gaz just appearing like a dark spectre of doom must have creeped Zim out I can totally see him bailing out a window to escape her

awwww progress for Zim and a small victory in helping him for Dib

all throughout the Gaz scene was how she acted in the episode Game Slave 2 when she stalked Iggins for the video game

Dib better have something good as a prize because if not his first attempt in helping Zim is going to implode and then explode in a fiery explosion

I wish Dib luck with Zim now that he knows the truth cause getting that little alien to admit what's really going on is like trying to steal snacks from the Tallest. Doable but you need a lot of time and planning put into it before you try