Reviews for Let Me Help You
Invader Ivy chapter 13 . 10/21/2011
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TheCartoonPrincess chapter 13 . 10/21/2011
I love the end of this chapter and there is nothing wrong with putting sweetness into a story, as long as it is balanced out I suppose(too much sweetness can make one sick, I would now) but you did it very well (I like seeing a soft side to Zim which you brought out well)

I feel sorry for Zim too, he just wants to be accepted amongst his own kind :(

Great update, can't wait for more chapters :)
Experiment G1T8L1 chapter 13 . 10/21/2011
Yay! You didn't fall into the "the only thing I like on this planet is you" trap! Many a good story has been ruined by that. Keep up the fantastic, megalomaniac work!
cheddarbiscuit chapter 13 . 10/20/2011
Are thoes some regular updates? It's about time.

Well, now that I know that you're back for good, at least for a little while, I don't feel compelled to scream, 'that wasn't enough!' this time.

I like that Dib is bringing out Zim's softer side, or at least, getting him to slowly admit that he has one.

Please keep updating.
Guitar Amateur chapter 13 . 10/20/2011
This was a very nice chapter. It made me laugh sometimes, and I smiled at the end. It wasn't quite sweet; more bittersweet.

Like... Tangy! Mmm... yummy... I like candy metaphors.

Hum... Lovely. I like reading this. It makes me feel warm and fuzzy inside. (Of course, that COULD just be the sweet tea that I'm drinking.)

Minnow-fish
Haku1013 chapter 13 . 10/19/2011
I think it should be Zim who's asking the questions next time. How can Zim trust the Dib with his answers if he can't be trusted with Dib's?
Invader Griz Jau and Rel chapter 13 . 10/19/2011
Griz: Good very good.

Jau: Oh Zim! That was sooooo sweet!

Rel:I have a question.

Jau: *grinning* shoot!

Rel: BANG! Could we make suggestions of refrences? I think I could come up with a few.
SaintHeartwing aka Ngrey651 chapter 13 . 10/19/2011
This might be the first time that Gaz is more a threat to Zim than Dib. Heh. And it really was sweet, a real, genuine heart-to-heart moment we had here with Dib and Zim. I never liked the idea that guys can't open up and be sensitive to each other, it's good to see people doing just that in stories. :)
Moth Mask chapter 13 . 10/19/2011
AAAAAWWW~! w That was sweet~
Zim'sMostLoyalServant chapter 13 . 10/19/2011
I wouldn't say the ending was too sweet - you're not the first person to write Zim as liking the night sky because he misses Irk. Anyway, I can't wait to see what the next step in Zim's emotional development is (or what Gaz is up to).

Keep up the good work.

Zim'sMostLoyalServant signing off.
PAKing Heat chapter 13 . 10/19/2011
... You've reposted Flashes Of Lightning from While The Cats Away...

You might want to fix it now...
AkashaV chapter 12 . 10/9/2011
Hurray for a new chapter! You've got me salivating for the next one. I can't wait to see where you take this story. And I totally dug that you made a Song of Ice and Fire reference. Very cool xD If you've only seen the new TV series, wait till you read the books! George R.R. Martin is a genius. If you HAVE read the books, I'm sure you'll agree :)
TheCartoonPrincess chapter 12 . 10/8/2011
Yay, you updated. I'm so happy I decided to see if I any of my favourite stories have been updated. I don't blame you for putting this on hold, I'm in a similar situation too with Uni too, so I won't pester you to update and rush this story.

Gaz was really scary, I thought you should know, and You describe her with really good detail :)
Haku1013 chapter 12 . 10/7/2011
I want you to know now, I hold people to their promises.

-_-
Haku1013 chapter 9 . 10/7/2011
I love the references you keep connecting to Dib XD
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