Reviews for Let Me Help You |
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Invader Ivy chapter 13 . 10/21/2011 i |
TheCartoonPrincess chapter 13 . 10/21/2011 I love the end of this chapter and there is nothing wrong with putting sweetness into a story, as long as it is balanced out I suppose(too much sweetness can make one sick, I would now) but you did it very well (I like seeing a soft side to Zim which you brought out well) I feel sorry for Zim too, he just wants to be accepted amongst his own kind :( Great update, can't wait for more chapters :) |
Experiment G1T8L1 chapter 13 . 10/21/2011 Yay! You didn't fall into the "the only thing I like on this planet is you" trap! Many a good story has been ruined by that. Keep up the fantastic, megalomaniac work! |
cheddarbiscuit chapter 13 . 10/20/2011 Are thoes some regular updates? It's about time. Well, now that I know that you're back for good, at least for a little while, I don't feel compelled to scream, 'that wasn't enough!' this time. I like that Dib is bringing out Zim's softer side, or at least, getting him to slowly admit that he has one. Please keep updating. |
Guitar Amateur chapter 13 . 10/20/2011 This was a very nice chapter. It made me laugh sometimes, and I smiled at the end. It wasn't quite sweet; more bittersweet. Like... Tangy! Mmm... yummy... I like candy metaphors. Hum... Lovely. I like reading this. It makes me feel warm and fuzzy inside. (Of course, that COULD just be the sweet tea that I'm drinking.) Minnow-fish |
Haku1013 chapter 13 . 10/19/2011 I think it should be Zim who's asking the questions next time. How can Zim trust the Dib with his answers if he can't be trusted with Dib's? |
Invader Griz Jau and Rel chapter 13 . 10/19/2011 Griz: Good very good. Jau: Oh Zim! That was sooooo sweet! Rel:I have a question. Jau: *grinning* shoot! Rel: BANG! Could we make suggestions of refrences? I think I could come up with a few. |
SaintHeartwing aka Ngrey651 chapter 13 . 10/19/2011 This might be the first time that Gaz is more a threat to Zim than Dib. Heh. And it really was sweet, a real, genuine heart-to-heart moment we had here with Dib and Zim. I never liked the idea that guys can't open up and be sensitive to each other, it's good to see people doing just that in stories. :) |
Moth Mask chapter 13 . 10/19/2011 AAAAAWWW~! w That was sweet~ |
Zim'sMostLoyalServant chapter 13 . 10/19/2011 I wouldn't say the ending was too sweet - you're not the first person to write Zim as liking the night sky because he misses Irk. Anyway, I can't wait to see what the next step in Zim's emotional development is (or what Gaz is up to). Keep up the good work. Zim'sMostLoyalServant signing off. |
PAKing Heat chapter 13 . 10/19/2011 ... You've reposted Flashes Of Lightning from While The Cats Away... You might want to fix it now... |
AkashaV chapter 12 . 10/9/2011 Hurray for a new chapter! You've got me salivating for the next one. I can't wait to see where you take this story. And I totally dug that you made a Song of Ice and Fire reference. Very cool xD If you've only seen the new TV series, wait till you read the books! George R.R. Martin is a genius. If you HAVE read the books, I'm sure you'll agree :) |
TheCartoonPrincess chapter 12 . 10/8/2011 Yay, you updated. I'm so happy I decided to see if I any of my favourite stories have been updated. I don't blame you for putting this on hold, I'm in a similar situation too with Uni too, so I won't pester you to update and rush this story. Gaz was really scary, I thought you should know, and You describe her with really good detail :) |
Haku1013 chapter 12 . 10/7/2011 I want you to know now, I hold people to their promises. -_- |
Haku1013 chapter 9 . 10/7/2011 I love the references you keep connecting to Dib XD |