Reviews for Let Me Help You |
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Jamie Wilson chapter 11 . 8/20/2011 This is a really good story. I love it. It's simple in a way that's advanced, if that makes sense. Please continue! |
Famelia Ly chapter 11 . 8/14/2011 Oh, God! I hope you'll be able to update soon! This is such an amazing story! I'm dying to know what'll happen next! I sincerely wish for Dib to be able to help Zim; I mean, it's so.. sad, really, everything you said about him. But it's also very true, and that's one of the reasons I'm enjoying this fic very much You're not rushing the story, which is laso a relief in itself since I find many authors tend to make this mistake. Well, I'll be eagerly waiting for the following chapter! Cheers! |
HolyCowWorshipper chapter 11 . 7/13/2011 Wow! This was my first Invader Zim fanifc; and what a good one to start with! I really liked it! _ Really sad to see no more chapters, haha. Keep it up! |
Emichan and PhoenixWarrior chapter 11 . 7/11/2011 Interesting... Well great chapter, I can't wait to find out what Zim actually likes about Earth. |
IhopeyoudieNOT chapter 11 . 7/11/2011 try to keep it out of development hell please. |
Sitar-Hero chapter 11 . 7/7/2011 Ooooh! Another update! Zim just keeps getting cuter and cuter! |
MissGalactica chapter 11 . 7/6/2011 I really loved this chapter! :) I hope you post the next chapter soon! I really am dying to read it! |
Guest chapter 11 . 7/6/2011 Love the story a little ooc but its not crapy ooc so I don't care, cant wait for the update. |
xoAmaxi chapter 11 . 7/5/2011 I just read all of this non-stop.. It's amazing! I tend to avoid Zim and Dib stories, because the majority of them are "romantic". *Shudders*. THIS, however, is brilliant, believable and very fascinating. It makes you think of the show from a whole new perspective. It's scarey because it's true; Zim's life is based on a lie... I'm simply itching to read the next chapter now, haha. VERY well written! :) |
chickens chapter 11 . 7/5/2011 I like that you used Poop Dog but didn't take the situation straight from the show, tweaking it instead. Also: AWESOME! I want more. |
cheddarbiscuit chapter 11 . 7/5/2011 Darnit, I'm a day late on this! Oh well. You were in America on the fourth of July? I sure hope you're having a good time over here, otherwise the thing with the bear is totally not worth it. No, bears are not awesome, they are dangerous.— ... I'm supposed to be reviewing, not checking up on you... Anyway, I thought the mention of Poop Dawg was brilliant! Dib's doing a really good job of... doing his job (I'm so eloquent!) here. I hope you get your inspiration back soon enough, but please, keep vacationing. |
Zim'sMostLoyalServant chapter 11 . 7/5/2011 I liked the reference to the "Door to Door" episode, especially pointing out how Poop Dog had to be a hallucination, and how Ms Bitters had to be going out of her way to torment her students with that "prize". Also, I'm liking the way Dib is approaching telling Zim the truth. I look forward to how that eventually turns out. Keep up the good work. Zim'sMostLoyalServant signing off. |
Guitar Amateur chapter 11 . 7/5/2011 :) X3 I had enjoyed the Poop Dog scene as well. I smiled. Then grinned excitedly. Then resumed to smiling as I enjoyed 'watching' Zim, playing out the scene in my mind. I almost frowned, but Zim's teen angst didn't let me. Instead, I CHUCKLED! Yes, for chuckling. And now I am giggling as I am combining alla my favorite scene from this recently read chapter. I still frown when I think of the previous chapter, because the Tallests are just being jerks. ...And I still smile when I am reminded of Zim's denial. It's so ZIMMEH! D Aherm. This chapter, well written, doo-dee-doo-dee-doo... Y'know, I'm going to stop commenting on that EVERY SINGLE chapter now. Freom now on, let's just assumed that the quality is GOOD, and if there are any CHANGES, like a spelling mistake missed, I'll point it out, then move on. Because I'm wearing out, with repeating this paragraph every chapter. Xp ...FEEL HONORED! Loyal reader, ~Em. |
P.I.R chapter 11 . 7/5/2011 Yay! An update! :D A bear? IN THE WILD? :o Holy crumpets... THAT IS AWESOME! :D Yay! :D Yes, I am saying yay a lot... O_o I only saw one, repititive mistake... You missed the capital E of Earth. x3 The "homework" idea is a nice touch Sid. :) I eagerly await your next update, TO SLEEP! *passes out from lack of sleep and caffiene* |
Moth Mask chapter 11 . 7/4/2011 YEA, DIBBUMS~! Go all psychologist on him! :D This is getting epic :3 |