Reviews for Let Me Help You
Invader Ivy chapter 3 . 11/17/2010
Love This Story! Please post the next chapter soon!
StartAgain chapter 3 . 11/17/2010
This is a really good story! I would have never thought of having Dib be Zim's counseler EVER, and i think up some preeety odd IZ concepts. Don't ask...

XD Anyway, keep up the good work!
astrotheology chapter 3 . 11/17/2010
Oooo, the plot! THE PLOT IS SHOWING!

I love it. And enjoy your Christmas shopping...(It's only November, though. You have a while.)
HeCallsMeHisChild chapter 3 . 11/17/2010
Absolutely hooked now.
P.I.R chapter 3 . 11/17/2010
YAY! SOME KIND OF PLOOOOOOT!

Near the end there was a mistake, you put ever instead of every. *feels superior to you in some small way*

I wonder what Dib is going to make of the house, surely his inner nut-case will get excited about his house.

And the gnomes, oh what fun he'll have with those gnomes.

Nooow UPDATE! Update, update, UPDATEY!

As soon as you can.

P.S I did my christmas shopping ages ago! :D
AkashaV chapter 3 . 11/17/2010
cliffhanger nooooooooo :p Nice chapter, looking forward to the next!
Fire Rage7 chapter 3 . 11/17/2010
I love this fic so far, I also Love the Transformers reference. :-)
CloudCuckooSquirrel chapter 3 . 11/17/2010
Aaaaah the suspense! Now I truly wanna see what happens next!

Good to know Dib hasn't changed so much... at all XD
Zim'sMostLoyalServant chapter 3 . 11/17/2010
Didn't seem too rushed to me - Dib was getting close to the truth, or Zim thought he was, so he lashed out to defend himself. And I really did like the cliffhanger; I can't wait to see Dib's reaction when he goes to Zim's house and meets his "parents".

Can't wait to see what happens next.

Keep up the good work.

Zim'sMostLoyalServant signing off.
astrotheology chapter 2 . 11/16/2010
:D

I like it a lot! Keep writing, I want to see what happens next. You're doing a good job.
PurplePoltergeist chapter 2 . 11/13/2010
Wonderful writing! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Moth Mask chapter 2 . 11/11/2010
Serious-ness is good, too. I like where this is going, so I'll stick with it either way. _
P.I.R chapter 2 . 11/11/2010
YOU SAID ZIM'S EYES WERE PURPLE! HOW DARE YOU! I'll get over it, but the almight ZIM will seek revenge. REVENGE I SAY!

Yeah, thats the only mistake I saw. :) So I decided to give you a little rant thing to tell you about it. Aren't I nice?

Technically we'll find out after you because you write it before we read it. XD

Now uuuupdaaaaaaaaate. :)
Keepthestoriegoing chapter 2 . 11/10/2010
Nice storie keep it up!
CloudCuckooSquirrel chapter 2 . 11/10/2010
This is such a really interesting concept, I liked it very much, besides you write brilliantly too

It's amazing to see how different are things now with this sympathetic grown-up Dib, can't wait to see how this goes on!

...

Must admit that this story brought a "Dib adopting Zim" image into my mind, and no matter of how disturbing it sounds (and certainly was at some point), I found it kinda cute too...
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