Reviews for Let Me Help You |
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Zim'sMostLoyalServant chapter 2 . 11/10/2010 I like the dynamic you're building for the two of them, especially how Dib feels that he can relate to Zim due to their similarities. Oh, and I liked how Dib momentarily suspected Zim of being an alien, but then decided he must be European instead; that was funny. I look forward to seeing where you go with this. Keep up the good work. Zim'sMostLoyalServant signing off. |
AkashaV chapter 2 . 11/10/2010 I personally hope Dib ends up helping Zim. I always felt so sorry for both of them in the show. And I just think of all the crazy awesome stuff they could accomplish together if they weren't both, well, crazy. :p Nice chapter! |
HeCallsMeHisChild chapter 2 . 11/10/2010 Much better writing, I like the dynamic, please do continue. |
P.I.R chapter 1 . 11/9/2010 You cant just do that! Dib has to find out Zim is an ALIEN! Please? Do more? OR I WILL TAKE OVER YOUR MIND WITH MY ALMIGHTY BOOKMARK OF DOOOOOOOM! And I didnt see that many mistakes... or any... But my grasp of the english language is not the best in the world. And I am kinda curious how he got there twenty years later... How does that happen? NOW DO MORE! OR YOUR MIND WILL BECOME MINE! |
TheZimMaster chapter 1 . 11/7/2010 Niiice! Continue please...this is getting really good! |
InvaderKai chapter 1 . 11/7/2010 Love it! I love how you kept them in character. :) I did find a few writing errors but it doesn't bother me. All I mostly care about is if it had a great story and it does. Please continue because I would love see what happens next. |
Jill the Pumpkin Queen chapter 1 . 11/7/2010 Make it a story! ? |
Zim'sMostLoyalServant chapter 1 . 11/6/2010 Looks interesting. I liked the reference to Mr. Dwicky (I'm assuming that's the old counselor Dib was referring to), and how Dib's beliefs have been so dulled he just thinks Zim is a deformed kid. I'd be very interested in seeing where you go with this. Keep up the good work. Zim'sMostLoyalServant signing off. |
HeCallsMeHisChild chapter 1 . 11/6/2010 I am definitely intrigued by this idea. Do continue. |
AkashaV chapter 1 . 11/6/2010 Haha, this was great. It certainly has a lot of potential for a much longer story. I think you should keep going and see where it goes. Either way, thanks for sharing :D |
Moth Mask chapter 1 . 11/6/2010 Heh. Zim is being very... Zim-ish. Nice job of keeping them in-character. I think this would make a really funny chapter-story. _ |