Reviews for Let Me Help You
HeCallsMeHisChild chapter 2 . 11/10/2010
Much better writing, I like the dynamic, please do continue.
P.I.R chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
You cant just do that! Dib has to find out Zim is an ALIEN!

Please? Do more?

OR I WILL TAKE OVER YOUR MIND WITH MY ALMIGHTY BOOKMARK OF DOOOOOOOM!

And I didnt see that many mistakes... or any... But my grasp of the english language is not the best in the world.

And I am kinda curious how he got there twenty years later... How does that happen?

NOW DO MORE! OR YOUR MIND WILL BECOME MINE!
TheZimMaster chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
Niiice! Continue please...this is getting really good!
InvaderKai chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
Love it! I love how you kept them in character. :) I did find a few writing errors but it doesn't bother me. All I mostly care about is if it had a great story and it does. Please continue because I would love see what happens next.
Jill the Pumpkin Queen chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
Make it a story! ?
Zim'sMostLoyalServant chapter 1 . 11/6/2010
Looks interesting. I liked the reference to Mr. Dwicky (I'm assuming that's the old counselor Dib was referring to), and how Dib's beliefs have been so dulled he just thinks Zim is a deformed kid. I'd be very interested in seeing where you go with this.

Keep up the good work.

Zim'sMostLoyalServant signing off.
HeCallsMeHisChild chapter 1 . 11/6/2010
I am definitely intrigued by this idea. Do continue.
AkashaV chapter 1 . 11/6/2010
Haha, this was great. It certainly has a lot of potential for a much longer story. I think you should keep going and see where it goes. Either way, thanks for sharing :D
Moth Mask chapter 1 . 11/6/2010
Heh. Zim is being very... Zim-ish. Nice job of keeping them in-character. I think this would make a really funny chapter-story. _
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