|Reviews for Too close|
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/27
Aww Jackie... I miss your stories, your sense of humour, your selfless thoughts for people you never met... and I miss you... RIP bb
| Faery66 chapter 4 . 3/5/2013
Please up date soon.
| Michonyx chapter 4 . 1/11/2013
Will you be posting again soon? I understand that real life has any number of duties and distractions; no doubt, these take up much of your time. I hope you finish this story; it's too good to end it as a cliffhanger. Please finish it.
| RayenOfDeadStarsAndPlanets chapter 4 . 1/9/2013
I love this! It's wonderful
| Kaylen Cooper chapter 4 . 10/3/2012
I like this!
It's a shame that it was never continued. If it ever is, I look forward to reading more. :)
| neko1998 chapter 4 . 8/24/2012
Yay uke Jacob
| Mizuki 8D chapter 4 . 8/20/2012
cute, please continue
| Purplehonor chapter 4 . 7/15/2012
Nice. Please keep going. I thik Rosalie and Emmett should get sick of Alice and Edward as well and join Jasper and Jacob. And maybe Leah and Quil and Seth as well... that could be an interesting band of travelers. Pelase update soon!
| Ice Tempest chapter 4 . 7/12/2012
I wish u the best of luck, and please don't forget about this story. :)
| rae horton chapter 4 . 6/16/2012
I hope you continue this story, even though it's been a while since it was last updated.
| nancy chapter 4 . 5/19/2012
Why have you quit writting? This seemed to be one of the better stories I have wandered across.
I am a 68yr old grandmother who happened across slash about a year ago and was instantly hooked. Your write like it is from the heart Why stop?
| Grim1989 chapter 4 . 2/16/2012
I hope ya come back to this story, it's getting really good, and it's just starting wit their adventure.
| anon chapter 4 . 10/15/2011
More! Must have more!
| kellstar chapter 4 . 9/22/2011
| princesstinkerbell45 chapter 4 . 7/26/2011
i adore u story and cant wait to see where their relationship leads too