Reviews for Watchful Eyes
dazedrose chapter 1 . 2/15/2011
That was way to cute and totally fun to read. Love from teddies pov :)
ligeisa chapter 1 . 2/4/2011
I love this little one-shot, its so adorable and from such a unique perspective. I found it amusing when you describe, " Teddy forces himself to sit back and watch." Such a good fic. Kudos to you :).
toffeenutlatte chapter 1 . 1/14/2011
Oh teddy you are one cute little bear ! :)
Mountain-Woman chapter 1 . 1/7/2011
Favorite part:

"And then, Damon walks over to Elena, stands so close to her he's invading her personal space and then some, and he's clicking his tongue at her and Teddy's amused because it's obvious that he wants to kiss her badly – his lips are this close to Elena's after all – but he's refraining for some reason.

Is he a gentleman? Somehow, Teddy doubts it.

Is he a gentleman to Elena?

Teddy thinks that rings more true.

Damon leaves with a charming smile and a wink not so long after that, but Elena stays rooted to her spot for a while. Teddy starts to wonder why until he sees Elena lick her lips, and he understands.

She was thinking about kissing him too."

I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story. My one constructive criticism: it felt like there was a scene missing between the compulsion and their finally being together. I would have liked to know a bit more about how they realized they were meant for each other. Otherwise, great story. It is so cute. Teddy needs more screentime... The mystery that surrounds him makes him one of the most intriguing characters on the show. (haha)
acrowthatlaughs chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
Bad Damon! Not in front of Teddy! I love it when people write stories about Teddy.. Though I've only read three, including yours.
mad-sugar-but-sweet chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
oh Teddy you cool kid!

love this story

xxx
snowangel787745 chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
Awww! This was very cute!
MoonlightDisco chapter 1 . 11/15/2010
Awwww. I absolutely love this! ]
Guest chapter 1 . 11/15/2010
cute. I so want Damon and Elana togther
LovexAndxFate chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
Cute doesn't even begin to describe this! I have to admit I was worried there wouldn't be a happy ending, but you came through in the end :) Once again you've taken something that sounds simple and made it beautiful.

Meg
hopelessromantic549 chapter 1 . 11/12/2010
aww! this is such a cute idea and you pulled it off so well.

Crying is the only thing you can do when you lose the person you love the most, after all.

:(
Christy19 chapter 1 . 11/12/2010
I love it, great story!
hekiv chapter 1 . 11/11/2010
SO HEARTBREAKING AND CUTE! PLZ PLZ MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER! :D
pompeystar chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
ABSOLUTE GENIUS!
iamnotavampire2 chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
This was really cute! I loved the POV of Teddy!
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