For the amount of shit you talked about cliches and other fan fictions this was completely trash terrible writing with a ungodly amount of plot holes and I would even have been upset if again you didn’t talk so much shit about other fanfics.

Why didn’t he go to the mind readers to help him through the trauma he went through at two, especially with Kage level parents. All I can say is this yellow flash and hobanero are terrible parents that did nothing to help there son

naruto turned down training are u stupid he's the so of the yellow flash meaning his life is always in danger and he doesn't know this and turned down training when he could be assassinated at any given moment by spies

so naruto is hinata and his sister is naruto wow original

You made Naruto a bitch

Minato’s father must have been Ash Ketchum...

Mother fuck what kind of story is this? Story support to be Naruto not namikaza family

Fuck up

You know, just offering to train him similarly doesn't make him less neglectful if he can't even see how Naruto was beat up by bullies. Sure, Naruto tried to hide it from them, but like you said he's still a seven year old while Minato is like one of the most-astute ninja Konoha has ever produced, so he should've been able to notice that even with Naruto trying to hide it.

Are they no anbu protecting the hokage kid ? Or you are just retard like that

Why is he so weak this is bullshit

The only thing i can say is, this is an immense dissapointment. Amenaza was great, but this? This is trash.

Yo dis fire

nOoOOOO dont give up on this

Nice