Reviews for One Twentieth of a Whole
Guest chapter 19 . 9/19
You haven't lost your touch short fight scens are better than long drawn out ones!
Guest chapter 12 . 9/19
Great story great execution but I hope it doesn't turn into a baritone seeks to bring peace to the ninja world bullshit!
Guest chapter 5 . 9/16
This is the shittest story I've read in a while.
Cody chapter 10 . 9/15
Good story idea decent writing horrible execution so far it's so hard to keep reading I realize that this is a massive au but you basically slaughtered what makes naruto well naruto completely this may as well been its own story all together not really a fan fiction just a fiction again good job on the idea and good writing but just not what myself finds in a good fan fiction based on my favorite fictional characters
DelayedInspiration chapter 19 . 9/15
I thought it was great. Can't wait for everyone to freak out over Naruto being a Tailed-Beast, and being alive.
Great chapter 19 . 9/9
Hey, thats pretty good!...
dracohalo117 chapter 19 . 9/9
Great chapter, loved it, I cannot wait to see the next chapter.

Guest chapter 19 . 9/8
i need moar
Guest chapter 19 . 9/8
Keep writing
bladetri chapter 19 . 9/8
like XD
Guest chapter 11 . 9/8
nice man
lets beat all the flamers who get personal
Broken Ascendent chapter 19 . 9/7
TomasDark chapter 19 . 9/7
Guest chapter 5 . 9/7
shit wow
ChronoMitsurugi chapter 19 . 9/7 could just say it was Orochimaru you know. The Kabuto reference gave it away. Also who else could there be for Kimmimaro to betray.

I'm not much of a fan of the direction this story is taken. It's going from a monster battle to conspiracy theories. Please less Orochimaru and all that jazz and more Bijuu fighting.
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