| Reviews for One Twentieth of a Whole |
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  Guest chapter 19 . 9/19 You haven't lost your touch short fight scens are better than long drawn out ones! |
| Guest chapter 12 . 9/19 Great story great execution but I hope it doesn't turn into a baritone seeks to bring peace to the ninja world bullshit! |
| Guest chapter 5 . 9/16 This is the shittest story I've read in a while. |
| Cody chapter 10 . 9/15 Good story idea decent writing horrible execution so far it's so hard to keep reading I realize that this is a massive au but you basically slaughtered what makes naruto well naruto completely this may as well been its own story all together not really a fan fiction just a fiction again good job on the idea and good writing but just not what myself finds in a good fan fiction based on my favorite fictional characters |
 DelayedInspiration chapter 19 . 9/15 I thought it was great. Can't wait for everyone to freak out over Naruto being a Tailed-Beast, and being alive. |
| Great chapter 19 . 9/9 Hey, thats pretty good!... |
| dracohalo117 chapter 19 . 9/9 Great chapter, loved it, I cannot wait to see the next chapter. dracohalo117 |
| Guest chapter 19 . 9/8 i need moar |
| Guest chapter 19 . 9/8 Keep writing |
| bladetri chapter 19 . 9/8 like XD |
| Guest chapter 11 . 9/8 nice man lets beat all the flamers who get personal |
| Broken Ascendent chapter 19 . 9/7 Yaaaaay. Updaaate |
| TomasDark chapter 19 . 9/7 Cool. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 9/7 shit wow |
| ChronoMitsurugi chapter 19 . 9/7 ...you could just say it was Orochimaru you know. The Kabuto reference gave it away. Also who else could there be for Kimmimaro to betray. I'm not much of a fan of the direction this story is taken. It's going from a monster battle to conspiracy theories. Please less Orochimaru and all that jazz and more Bijuu fighting. |