Reviews for One Twentieth of a Whole
Buttonspaz chapter 18 . 12/27/2015
Oooh, I always enjoy an update from you, this story is one of the things that keeps me waking up in the morning. I MUST know the ending to such a great and interesting fic. Keep up the good work sir!
Allhailthesith chapter 3 . 12/27/2015
oh wow minato lived didn't see that one coming. i hate this naruto and i hope he changes.
Wolfone10 chapter 9 . 12/27/2015
How did Chiyo of all people beat the Shika Fuin? She screwed up even sealing the one tail! And it was stored in a flipping teapot at the time! She has to be the worst sealer in the entire naruverse!
The Richmaster chapter 18 . 12/27/2015
Great chapter; I look forward to seeing what happens with Orochimaru and how Kimimaro reacts
dracohalo117 chapter 18 . 12/27/2015
Well, well, it would seem shit hit the fan hard here.

Amachi, been a long time since I have seen him used in a fanfic, wonder if we will get to see Isaribi as well. She always was my favorite filler character.

Dragon Blaze-X chapter 18 . 12/27/2015
for some reason I get the feeling of Impel down here. BUT IT LIVES SO WHO CARES
Wolfone10 chapter 7 . 12/27/2015
HUH? That makes no sense.. you JUST said that having a human consciousness is what makes him capible of absorbing, that the bijuu are "stuck" THEN you say he can be absorbed too? That makes no sense whatsoever! How does being able to absorb bijuu in any way shape or form get you to able to be absorbed? WHICH AGAIN MAKES NO SENSE if the bijuu are "stuck"
Wolfone10 chapter 5 . 12/23/2015
This story could have actually went in a lot of cool ways, if naruto wasn't always so FREAKING WEAK! Even as a bijuu he sucks ass! I mean there is weak and then there is the embarrassment he is in this story! Even bijuu turned he's still kinda retarded! And don't quote his age, he doesn't have a brain anymore so that's a moot point!1 He's a idiot, weak, and a coward! I won't be recommending this one!
PowerWithoutClearPurpose chapter 17 . 12/22/2015
Please, please update!
SakuraHeicho - Whitekitty44 chapter 17 . 12/17/2015
Noooooo! Please update I need more!
WHACKHEAD chapter 17 . 12/9/2015
One of my fav fics, keep updating. Thanks for sharing.
TheWick chapter 17 . 12/2/2015
Woohoo! A new chapter on one of my favorite stories, that's always nice. Great chapter!
Guest chapter 17 . 11/29/2015
When next update ?
Guest chapter 3 . 11/24/2015
It would be cool if there was a story that started out similar to this where he is weak and ends up being a fuinjutsu master and has a bunch of awesome tools and devices.
Mr. Haze chapter 17 . 11/24/2015
Man this story is crazy awesome, just wish you could Naruto his body back, it's kinda weird him trying to be. Lizard mm, it doesn't make much sense. Plus for some reason I feel like you should make him into a dragon.
So later he could battle Kurama
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