Nice

THis sucks btw

This. story was epic. Such a shame it got cancelled

For all the guys that say Naruto is weak cause he got his reptilian ass handed to him by Mei, remember that in cannon Gyuki and the Third Raikage fought of to a standstill

Bitch naruto

Good Chapter!

This was a really cool idea for a short story that's fast paced sad it was dropped

Great job

no offense but you do know it is entirely the authors right to make the characters in their FANFICTION however they want right? i mean if they want him to grow some inches. gain more muscle, get longer hair, or use a sword then that is their choice entirely. i mean no disrespect or offense but it just annoys me when everyone tries to say how something should be done when they arent the ones writing the fic, now with that being said yes the readers do have the right to make some helpful point outs such as spelling, or giving an opinion on something if the author asks for it, or even asking about something, but there is no reason to get all insane and downright rude over it

Bitch naruto

Where you describe that he created and split the Ten tails into nine beasts, isn't it the Creation of All things? Izanagi is that jutsu uchiha uses to warp illusion with reality.

Did anyone adopt it? Id still like to read it

naruto is so weak

Update

That ending reminded me alot about Afro Samurai. Heh, I like where this is going.