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ramsesjames05 chapter 5 . 9/19/2020
Guiltyofmycrimess chapter 20 . 8/10/2020
THis sucks btw
Morrow Walker chapter 1 . 6/13/2020
This. story was epic. Such a shame it got cancelled
Morrow Walker chapter 1 . 6/13/2020
For all the guys that say Naruto is weak cause he got his reptilian ass handed to him by Mei, remember that in cannon Gyuki and the Third Raikage fought of to a standstill
Guest chapter 2 . 6/8/2020
Bitch naruto
look2019 chapter 19 . 2/13/2020
Good Chapter!
NazgulBelserion chapter 20 . 1/12/2020
This was a really cool idea for a short story that's fast paced sad it was dropped
Monster King chapter 20 . 3/28/2019
Great job
thunderofdeath97 chapter 1 . 1/4/2019
no offense but you do know it is entirely the authors right to make the characters in their FANFICTION however they want right? i mean if they want him to grow some inches. gain more muscle, get longer hair, or use a sword then that is their choice entirely. i mean no disrespect or offense but it just annoys me when everyone tries to say how something should be done when they arent the ones writing the fic, now with that being said yes the readers do have the right to make some helpful point outs such as spelling, or giving an opinion on something if the author asks for it, or even asking about something, but there is no reason to get all insane and downright rude over it
Kingkong101 chapter 5 . 9/28/2018
Bitch naruto
WackySpace chapter 1 . 5/24/2018
Where you describe that he created and split the Ten tails into nine beasts, isn't it the Creation of All things? Izanagi is that jutsu uchiha uses to warp illusion with reality.
Dinodogst chapter 20 . 12/3/2017
Did anyone adopt it? Id still like to read it
Meltricon12 chapter 16 . 11/15/2017
naruto is so weak
Poe489 chapter 20 . 11/13/2017
LOBBERDARK chapter 7 . 7/18/2017
That ending reminded me alot about Afro Samurai. Heh, I like where this is going.
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