|Reviews for One Twentieth of a Whole|
| Guest chapter 20 . 5/29/2017
You know to make this faster instead of giving up lamely. Try making naruto absorb other people's chakra like kaguya.
| HadoFoxGodAsashi chapter 4 . 4/23/2017
Oh fuck off you Kishimoto loving piece of shit.
| Blitzstrahl chapter 15 . 4/11/2017
I thought the Raikage was in Kiri on a dipolmancy mission?
| Dark Patrician chapter 20 . 4/9/2017
If you aren't enjoying writing the story anymore, then I understand cancelling it. I'm not happy about it, but I understand it.
If I could ask, what was the overall idea with the rest of the plot? Naruto vs. the Bijuu in order or would there be more than just that?
| MrMortal chapter 1 . 4/1/2017
I liked the first chapter but it gets kinda hard to read because of all the bad cliche story's there are
| ffvvrrgegesopigh chapter 20 . 3/10/2017
no fuck u you bitch
| s.k.f.f.f chapter 20 . 3/4/2017
this was a pretty unique story, sorry to see is cancelled
| Guest chapter 19 . 2/26/2017
there was not balance of power to begin with since some village's had 2 biju while other's only had 1
| Impstar chapter 20 . 2/28/2017
It's really too bad that this was stopped, I really liked the idea. But you're the author, and if you want to write something else, well, I'll be following that too.
| saiyan prince1 chapter 20 . 2/27/2017
Sad to see this one being stopped but thank u for ur honesty
| YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 12 . 2/26/2017
Why would changing into a human form take any Chakra at all given that he IS a god damn Chakra construct to start with? It shouldn't take anything at all, just will power to reshape his form.
| Guest chapter 20 . 2/23/2017
| Guest Z chapter 20 . 2/23/2017
Nooooooooo this was my favourite followed by amenza because it was about the bijuu side of the story and reading naruto gain more tails. Please don't cancel this.
| chivotenkai chapter 20 . 2/23/2017
It is a real pity, it is true that the slowness of updating is appreciated but in that sense one does not have infinite time to write.
At least I would have liked a scene where the parents discovered the truth about Naruto.
Unfortunately I've seen this type of situations before, writers who cancel or promise a "remake".
Most of the time, they abandon it to the few chapters or simply that remake never arrives ...
| Broken Ascendent chapter 20 . 2/24/2017
Extremely saddening but I accept, leave an update when that new one comes out eh?