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Guest chapter 20 . 5/29/2017
You know to make this faster instead of giving up lamely. Try making naruto absorb other people's chakra like kaguya.
HadoFoxGodAsashi chapter 4 . 4/23/2017
Oh fuck off you Kishimoto loving piece of shit.
Blitzstrahl chapter 15 . 4/11/2017
I thought the Raikage was in Kiri on a dipolmancy mission?
Dark Patrician chapter 20 . 4/9/2017
If you aren't enjoying writing the story anymore, then I understand cancelling it. I'm not happy about it, but I understand it.

If I could ask, what was the overall idea with the rest of the plot? Naruto vs. the Bijuu in order or would there be more than just that?
MrMortal chapter 1 . 4/1/2017
I liked the first chapter but it gets kinda hard to read because of all the bad cliche story's there are
ffvvrrgegesopigh chapter 20 . 3/10/2017
no fuck u you bitch
s.k.f.f.f chapter 20 . 3/4/2017
this was a pretty unique story, sorry to see is cancelled
Guest chapter 19 . 2/26/2017
there was not balance of power to begin with since some village's had 2 biju while other's only had 1
Impstar chapter 20 . 2/28/2017
It's really too bad that this was stopped, I really liked the idea. But you're the author, and if you want to write something else, well, I'll be following that too.
saiyan prince1 chapter 20 . 2/27/2017
Sad to see this one being stopped but thank u for ur honesty
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 12 . 2/26/2017
Why would changing into a human form take any Chakra at all given that he IS a god damn Chakra construct to start with? It shouldn't take anything at all, just will power to reshape his form.
Guest chapter 20 . 2/23/2017
Guest Z chapter 20 . 2/23/2017
Nooooooooo this was my favourite followed by amenza because it was about the bijuu side of the story and reading naruto gain more tails. Please don't cancel this.
chivotenkai chapter 20 . 2/23/2017
It is a real pity, it is true that the slowness of updating is appreciated but in that sense one does not have infinite time to write.
At least I would have liked a scene where the parents discovered the truth about Naruto.
Unfortunately I've seen this type of situations before, writers who cancel or promise a "remake".
Most of the time, they abandon it to the few chapters or simply that remake never arrives ...
Broken Ascendent chapter 20 . 2/24/2017
Extremely saddening but I accept, leave an update when that new one comes out eh?
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