|Reviews for Rather Swim Ashore|
| Natalie Ryan chapter 1 . 6/27/2017
Love this story. It was awesomely shaped and I enjoyed how Danny had made all those lists and sub-lists and the sub of his sub-lists. Funny where your mind tenda to go when you let it loose. That about the strawberries was an interesting detail, too. And Danny knowing it was all related to Steve. Having an ohana caring for you may do wonders and he'll like Hawaii before he can say pineapple. That with the popsicle made me laugh.
| Cubit2 chapter 1 . 12/17/2016
You did a wonderful job getting inside Danny's head and showing us what makes him tick and how he thinks and how the things he says don't always reflect the way he really feels. Very good work.
| Tina Kipton chapter 1 . 6/20/2016
Thank you so much for posting; I loved it!
| abni chapter 1 . 4/22/2015
Awesome story, shows great insight into the characters. Loved it! Thanks for sharing :)
| Long Live BRUCAS chapter 1 . 2/11/2015
Nice little one shot.
| sknkodiak chapter 1 . 7/25/2014
What a great story!
| Chrisii chapter 1 . 6/8/2014
OMG This is awesome. Good work on capturing Danny's thoughts, but I just have one question, how did Steve figure out Danny was in the cage?
However, I can gladly let that slide because this story was so amazing. Great work :) ! And You captured the personality-s perfectly.. One other thing.. Do his cousins have tv's? xD
| Gratia Astra chapter 1 . 1/10/2014
Awww! I love it! It's poor Danny getting all abused again, and his concerned teammates. Great idea about the lists, I can totally picture him counting how many times Steve's gotten him shot to pass the hours. The end where he FINALLY gets rescued is cute too. I enjoyed reading that. Almost as much as I'm enjoying watching the show.
| john'sgirlfriend2date chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
I love your fics. Thank you for sharing them. Q-How did they find Danno?
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/22/2013
I love this story.
| celtics chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
Che meravigliosa squadra, bellissima storia, è bello sapere che ognuno di loro può contare sull'aiuto degli altri.
Stupendo, ciao alla prossima.
| CasiNight chapter 1 . 2/20/2012
Good story. Really enjoyed it. Exactly what i was looking for.
| inkspire chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
What was that I said about not letting Danny wind up in the hospital again? Seriously. :P You're putting him through as much torture as Steve exposes him to! (The making of lists and sub-lists and sub-sub-lists was great.) I'd love a follow-up/tag to this one, with them catching this Simmons guy, and getting revenge on him. Perhaps with Danny's ...creative input, lol. I can only imagine the phone call that would result once Rachel found out. Poor thing. (Danny.) Made me sympathetically weary and exhausted while reading! I'm glad I'm not stuck in a cage underwater, cuffed awkwardly so I couldn't sleep. Sheesh. These ingenious criminals of Hawaii, I tell ya. :P Good thing we've got ingenious good guys to get after 'em and hang them off rooftops!
| Pamela Tutor Easley chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
Being from South Alabama(USA), we go to the beach all year round. We walk the beach, surf, do a little surf fishing, but we only swim from April to around the first weekend in Sept. From Sept.-March the water's to cold or the sand fleas are too abundant. Any way I've been around the water all my life and never have I thought of being held captive in a cage under a boat underwater. "What's the matter with you?" (Sorry Channeling a little Danny here.) Your one sick
Danny Williams is my Man and I like it he when rants at Super Seal Steve, he's soft and gooey with Grace, being the supportive friend, kicking bad-guy butt or up it his neck in trouble. Not so much fighting with Rachel... I don't like her.
Oh Darn I'm off topic. Where was I, oh yeah the story. Great plot. I was right there with Danny the whole way. I was disappointed when Steve missed him the first time on the boat. And when he felt the tug on his ankle I swear my mind went straight to "JAWS". I was relieved to it was Super Seal to the rescue. Then the hatch open and there was Chin and Kono looking down at Danny. I was right there looking up at then too.
I gotta tell you there a line in the story that is so Danny, but I'm sure know it already.
"Yes, I have sub-lists. I have lists, sub-lists, and sub-lists of my freakin' sub-lists. I've been locked in a damn cage for twenty-four hours and change, what else was I supposed to do?"
It was my favorite line in the story. Great Danny story. Great job. I will just image Super Seal Steve and Chin "giving Simmons a taste of his on medicine" for Danny, since you haven written the taken-down story maybe?
I hope there's no hurt feelings. I try to write only good reviews because I feel if I didn't like something its just me. I might comment on something that I thinks is technically incorrect or needs further research like a medical procedures, treatments or tests of which I'm familiar. I've had a lot over the last few years plus I'm a Cancer survivor(Stage 2 Colo-Rectal) 1yr 8 months Cancer free. But life's to short to FLAME anyone creative work. If we could write we would all do it but we don't all have same gifts. Yours is to write. Keep writing and I will keep reading. Reply back if you would like. I really enjoyed this, I don't think I have read a story like this one but before.
| cytpotter chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
Wow! I really enjoyed this little fic! Great job!