Fun story...and nice lists. ;)

LOL! LOVE IT! THANK YOU FOR YOUR HARD WORK!

I liked your story but I get Danny's in a cage but is he actually IN the water ? So how does he breathe...? Maybe I missed something...

Loved it! You really captured Danny well!

Loved it! I like how you didn’t overdo it or under do it with the pain/injury/dire circumstances. It was all very believable!

This is amazing! I love Danny's internal dialogue. Well done.

Love this story. It was awesomely shaped and I enjoyed how Danny had made all those lists and sub-lists and the sub of his sub-lists. Funny where your mind tenda to go when you let it loose. That about the strawberries was an interesting detail, too. And Danny knowing it was all related to Steve. Having an ohana caring for you may do wonders and he'll like Hawaii before he can say pineapple. That with the popsicle made me laugh.

You did a wonderful job getting inside Danny's head and showing us what makes him tick and how he thinks and how the things he says don't always reflect the way he really feels. Very good work.

Thank you so much for posting; I loved it!

Awesome story, shows great insight into the characters. Loved it! Thanks for sharing :)

Nice little one shot.

What a great story!

OMG This is awesome. Good work on capturing Danny's thoughts, but I just have one question, how did Steve figure out Danny was in the cage?
However, I can gladly let that slide because this story was so amazing. Great work :) ! And You captured the personality-s perfectly.. One other thing.. Do his cousins have tv's? xD

Awww! I love it! It's poor Danny getting all abused again, and his concerned teammates. Great idea about the lists, I can totally picture him counting how many times Steve's gotten him shot to pass the hours. The end where he FINALLY gets rescued is cute too. I enjoyed reading that. Almost as much as I'm enjoying watching the show.

I love your fics. Thank you for sharing them. Q-How did they find Danno?