Very descriptive! You did a good job of his captivity being interesting and a character development, rather than a bore. And I love that Steve missed him the first time around - a nice twist. Thanks for sharing.

OHMYGOD THIS WAS AWESOME AND ADORABLE

Hm, nice :D Awesome job!

This story is awesome! I have been really craving some excellent Danny whump with a healthy side of team worry and friendship, and did this ever deliver! I also really loved the stuff with Danny in the cage. Excellent fic! Goes on my list of faves!

great story ... I read it in about 10 minutes. very entertaining.

I can totally see Danny keeping mental lists in his head. Reason to hate Hawaii#152. XD

Love the mental lists Danny was making up to keep from getting bored. Very funny.

Awesome oneshot!

~Blue Rowan

Oh, wow, this is awesome! I pretty much love everything about it; the way you kept everyone in character (and Danny snarking until the very end!), how Danny would rather stay in the cage than lose hours with Gracie, the way Steve totally missed Danny the first time on the boat (because Steve can be pretty clueless, can't he?), and that little moment with Kono at the end! I definitely love it and can't wait for your next fic!

I totally loved this story! I thought you did a great job on everyone's characters and I really liked how much Danny's team cares for him!

Very nicely done. I love a good little Danny h/c, and water and cages is a great way to go ;) thanks for the entertaining read!

great read ;) loved the story! think they should have a day or 2 afterwards to reflect on this whole thing, and just be a group of friends hangin out without the bad guys ;) in any case its a great read! thanks for the story

Just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this story. It's very well written, with just the right amount of suspense, Danny whumping and humor, perfect for Five-0. I loved the lists about family members, especially the bit about cousins who "procreate too often to keep track."

Great characterizations and dialog between them.

A great , well written story! And I loved the wry sense of humour running through it!Now if they would just show this on UK tv...!

Love it! Absolutely amazing! Seriously, there's been almost none of it, but I'm already a Danno!Whump junkie (;. Thank you for beginning to fill that void.

Just wonderful! (: So glad you wrote this.

How much did I love this story! A lot - that's how much. Him having lists and sublists and sublists for his sublists is just so in character. So hoping you continue to write in this fandom - especially the origin of Danny's scars from your last story Scars (which I think I reviewed, but if I didn't, it too was total love. Thanks so much for sharing!

Great story! Poor Danno! Everything happens to him. You had me on the edge of my seat hoping SOMEBODY would find him soon. Looking forward to more from you.