Reviews for What Doesn't Kill Us
randommayserious chapter 13 . 2/28
You're such a very good writer! Hope you make another ncis fanfic! :)
randommayserious chapter 7 . 2/28
Love this story
randommayserious chapter 1 . 2/28
Love itt
SarahthePuppyLover chapter 13 . 5/6/2013
This story was amazing! :)
Guest chapter 13 . 5/5/2013
You captured each of the characters essence, personality, mind, etc freaking perfectly omg this story is sooooo so good :)
TVCrimeDramaFANATIC chapter 8 . 7/27/2012
REALLY GOOD. But you are using too many simple sentances. They are too short. a couple is okay but you are using them for pretty much the whole thing. It is kinda getting boring to read but the content is fantastic. You just NEED to get rid of most of the simple sentances and merge them to make compound or complex sentances. :) Well done though. This is only the 2nd story of my 5 years on fanfiction that I am reading properly and am enjoying tremendously! THANK YOU!
TVCrimeDramaFANATIC chapter 1 . 7/27/2012
That was amazing!
ringsofakhaten chapter 13 . 3/17/2012
Best sick-Ziva fic I've read! Great job! Thanks for sharing, I loved it(:
Big Big Fan chapter 5 . 8/21/2011
AAAAAAAAARRRRRGHHHHHHHH! What on earth are you doing to poor Ziva? will she die? will she not die?
Big Big Fan chapter 4 . 8/21/2011
Aaaarghhhhhh whats gonna happpppen?
Big Big Fan chapter 3 . 8/21/2011
Another Great chapter
Big Big Fan chapter 2 . 8/21/2011
Wow. Awesome chapter - love it
Big Big Fan chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
Wow. I love this story, slight mistake though

"Thank you McGee," Ziva murmured.

"You're welcome."

"Anytime. You okay?"

"I am fine McGee."

When read, it goes ziva, mcgee , ziva mcgee. but it acctually goes ziva mcgee mcgee ziva .

I think you get what I mean but apart from that - Amazing
Nahau Moondust chapter 13 . 5/26/2011
Sweet.
Nahau Moondust chapter 12 . 5/26/2011
Why do they alwas talk in the men bathroom?
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