Reviews for Wait You're Not A Masseuse
CrystalBalle chapter 1 . 8/6
great, I want a massage now. This was hilarious (especially the flagpole. That had me laughing for 5 minutes). Loved your story and good job with not having Luffy OOC.
Baka chapter 1 . 6/14
I want a message now
JamesDeanMyQueen chapter 1 . 3/23
I think I read over the massage part a hundred times, imagining how good it felt. Great writing!
Plume-now chapter 1 . 1/5
This first chapter was AWESOME.
Somebody adviced me this fic on Tumblr when I was asking for some LawLu and this person was right to give me this one. The characters are not OOC to my mind (ok maybe a little but I don't see it then) I'm just so glad I've found it. Your ideas are awesome, and you write very well.
Can't wait to read the following - unfortunatly I have to work first T.T
(Oh I'm sorry if my English wasn't very clear I'm French and not English xD)
Thank you so much,
We need more LawLu fanfics.

Lara Dorponde chapter 3 . 9/29/2015
Just perfect
I'm speechless

I had a my buddy to read this
By the time he was done
*sorry if I am too descriptive*
He was dripping precum

We definitely had a fun time afterwards

Keep up the good work
Kandykornsheba chapter 3 . 5/20/2015
What the fuck robin
I love this story
But law scared me at first
Guest chapter 1 . 4/19/2015
Urrg! Now i really want a massage too! I was reading this thinking how nice it would be to have my back done! Nice going with the descriptions.
Yuki Artsa chapter 3 . 3/30/2015
Aiko: -passes out from nosebleed-
Shiro: -ignores blood all over body- Ah, that was really relaxing. C'mon Utsubyo, I'm not done yet.
Utsubyo: -willingly follows to bedroom-
Dimentio: -floats by- Is she...
Me: Yes. With a cat that has no mouth and can pull out anything. I ship it like I do wity Chi and Fu.
Chi: Even you know it won't happen.
Fu: -dark aura wavers-
Nippy: A better thief than the Cat Burglar, ey?
Uno: -rolls eyes-
Yuki Artsa chapter 2 . 3/30/2015
Aiko: -shivers- If Shiro-sama and I...
Shiro: What the fuck are you on about? AND WHY ARE YOU GUYS WATCHING?!
Me/Utsubyo: -watching intently-
Aiko: -hides terrible blush- N-Nothing!
Shiro: e_e
Yuki Artsa chapter 1 . 3/30/2015
Me: -reads about the bet Usopp starts, laughs uncontrollably for ten minutes-
Shiro: ._.; Is she going to be alive?
Utsubyo: -writes- "Why would you care?"
Aiko: It's ruining her massage, duh! -massaging Shiro-
Me/Utsubyo: -thinks- ... Crafty bastard.
Carol Zoldik chapter 2 . 12/8/2014
I'm impressed!
Note 1.000.000
The first boy/boy I read and I'm in love!
What talent you have!
fangirlhaven chapter 3 . 6/13/2014
That flagpole... XD
86fran chapter 4 . 6/12/2014
Nice lawxlu, good plottwists, i enjoyed reading
Lisette chapter 2 . 2/26/2014
I enjoyed that a lot!
Lisette chapter 1 . 2/26/2014
I know ! I felt the same way because I really want a massage now!
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