|Reviews for Wait You're Not A Masseuse|
| CrystalBalle chapter 1 . 8/6
great, I want a massage now. This was hilarious (especially the flagpole. That had me laughing for 5 minutes). Loved your story and good job with not having Luffy OOC.
| Baka chapter 1 . 6/14
I want a message now
| JamesDeanMyQueen chapter 1 . 3/23
I think I read over the massage part a hundred times, imagining how good it felt. Great writing!
| Plume-now chapter 1 . 1/5
This first chapter was AWESOME.
Somebody adviced me this fic on Tumblr when I was asking for some LawLu and this person was right to give me this one. The characters are not OOC to my mind (ok maybe a little but I don't see it then) I'm just so glad I've found it. Your ideas are awesome, and you write very well.
Can't wait to read the following - unfortunatly I have to work first T.T
(Oh I'm sorry if my English wasn't very clear I'm French and not English xD)
Thank you so much,
We need more LawLu fanfics.
| Lara Dorponde chapter 3 . 9/29/2015
I had a my buddy to read this
By the time he was done
*sorry if I am too descriptive*
He was dripping precum
We definitely had a fun time afterwards
Keep up the good work
| Kandykornsheba chapter 3 . 5/20/2015
What the fuck robin
I love this story
But law scared me at first
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/19/2015
Urrg! Now i really want a massage too! I was reading this thinking how nice it would be to have my back done! Nice going with the descriptions.
| Yuki Artsa chapter 3 . 3/30/2015
Aiko: -passes out from nosebleed-
Shiro: -ignores blood all over body- Ah, that was really relaxing. C'mon Utsubyo, I'm not done yet.
Utsubyo: -willingly follows to bedroom-
Dimentio: -floats by- Is she...
Me: Yes. With a cat that has no mouth and can pull out anything. I ship it like I do wity Chi and Fu.
Chi: Even you know it won't happen.
Fu: -dark aura wavers-
Me: A GIRL CAN DREAM.
Nippy: A better thief than the Cat Burglar, ey?
Uno: -rolls eyes-
Me: WHY ARE YOU ALL HERE NOW?!
| Yuki Artsa chapter 2 . 3/30/2015
Aiko: -shivers- If Shiro-sama and I...
Shiro: What the fuck are you on about? AND WHY ARE YOU GUYS WATCHING?!
Me/Utsubyo: -watching intently-
Aiko: -hides terrible blush- N-Nothing!
| Yuki Artsa chapter 1 . 3/30/2015
Me: -reads about the bet Usopp starts, laughs uncontrollably for ten minutes-
Shiro: ._.; Is she going to be alive?
Utsubyo: -writes- "Why would you care?"
Aiko: It's ruining her massage, duh! -massaging Shiro-
Me/Utsubyo: -thinks- ... Crafty bastard.
| Carol Zoldik chapter 2 . 12/8/2014
The first boy/boy I read and I'm in love!
What talent you have!
| fangirlhaven chapter 3 . 6/13/2014
That flagpole... XD
| 86fran chapter 4 . 6/12/2014
Nice lawxlu, good plottwists, i enjoyed reading
| Lisette chapter 2 . 2/26/2014
I enjoyed that a lot!
| Lisette chapter 1 . 2/26/2014
I know ! I felt the same way because I really want a massage now!