Reviews for now i'm everybody it's less than i've ever been
underlings chapter 1 . 5/10/2012
This was really excellent. I liked the way you portrayed Bob, and the family. The ending was very poignant, and showcased the feelings of uselessness he had at the beginning of the movie.
jokerboy66 chapter 1 . 12/1/2010
i didn't even know they still made Incredibles fanfics anymore *nods head approvingly* Nice job! :)
amalimrock chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
Wow, this is pretty dark. I couldn't imagine Bob's life before the events of The Incredibles took place, and you've said it all in this fic! Nice job.
The Aberrant One chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
Okay. For a short fic...I like this. Would you mind if I borrow part of this for my fic later on. I have a scene coming up where Bob is talking about his family and the thoughts he had about his children when they were born in this story would be perfect dialogue material.

As for the story itself...this is very in character and pretty much portrays Bob almost like the way he was portrayed in the movie.