Reviews for Sincerely, Sergeant Masen
Twilight Fan chapter 9 . 5/28/2014
I think that Titanic was sad, but Remember Me was a little to close to home for cousin Worked at the World Trade Center and we would have lost her if she had gone to work that day. So I'm gonna have to say Remember Me was a much sadder movie. The ending scene all I could think is that God Kim wasn't at work.
I am enjoying your story so far.
katherine chapter 22 . 4/28/2014
Is it really 18 the age to have a sex? But one can drive car at 16. Interesting.
Rose chapter 49 . 4/20/2014
Such an amazing story! I am in love with it. Thank you so much for writing this beautiful story. :)
Featheredphoenix chapter 31 . 4/16/2014
Whyred did the gangsters have to comeback into the story ugh
D18LifeMusic chapter 44 . 3/15/2014
I like the story! Sarcasm is like breathing for me. I also enjoy the song lyrics
TaBBZZZ chapter 38 . 3/7/2014
This chapter had really touched me, for a high school student you have hit the nail on the head. My sister In law suffered from a placenta abruption in February last year at 34 weeks, her son also did not make it... During the labour her husband actually posted on Facebook the lyrics to here without you by three doors down and as only family knew what was happening we all knew what he was feeling. I want to commend you on writing this chapter so perfectly, and I wanted to share that it's like you have seen into the lives of my family from the last twelve months. Thank you xxx
Jadey.Loves.Twilight chapter 49 . 2/24/2014
So, I'm watching Twilight Forever, and they were talking about "Jasper's Army," and how they started it up because they read a fanfiction about Bella finding a website about the sending care packages and letters to the people fighting in Iraq... I'm pretty sure it was your story that they mentioned. I may or may not have freaked out because I LOVE your story, and it made me think of it again. :)
I just wanted to let you know that really.. And tell you that your story is amazing. 3
inureyesihaveitall chapter 1 . 2/19/2014
great story
Pats2nd chapter 49 . 2/15/2014
Really good and well written. I love that this Bella isn't so down on her self. It was funny when it needed to be and touching when it was called for.
Cryibaby chapter 49 . 2/11/2014
awesome story!
Snappher chapter 3 . 1/20/2014
Yay, he wrote back! Gotta love snail mail...tho no matter how much i send i dont get any back. Was! My friends suck.

Lol on the Midol!

By the time he gets back, she wont be jailbait anymore. Hurrah!
Snappher chapter 1 . 1/20/2014
Im intrigued. Surprised Bella is in high school...figured she would be an adult, but Cullen may be only 18 himself!

Just spent some time on that site..thinking of sending some ladies a package. Ive got a zillion disposable razors, and some fancy stuff fro bath and body works that i havent touched...i get so much on sale and cant use it fast enough! Mmmmm, gotta work on that. :). Thanks for mentioning the site!
li-spar1 chapter 49 . 1/7/2014
Such a good story! You managed to get my 2 favorite types in one mafia and soldiers.
Evelyne-raconte chapter 49 . 1/3/2014
OH MY ROB ! You fiction is amazing. I love Sergeantward and Golfella.
You are a great author, very talented.
Thank you so much for sharing your imagination with us.
I wish you and your family all the best along 2014.
Happy New Year ! Bonne et Heureuse Année 2014 !
Irrevocably-Edwards chapter 38 . 1/1/2014
Come on! At 32 weeks with a ruptured placenta...they would have never made her push...it would have been an emergency c section. And the out of the blue "Mafia" involvement?! This story had great potential but you are loosing readers because the circumstances are sooo out of the realm of reality for an AH. I know you said, "you write for yourself" and you don't care about pleasing others, but I don't buy that. If that was true you wouldn't post on a public site and you wouldn't write about how much it "doesn't" bother you. Look...I'm not trying to be a complete asshole because you do have great potential as a writer. But you need to do a bit more research, weed out a lot of the internal monolog between situations, and even though this is fanfiction, try not to make more believable crisis. I understand that this story is already complete, but just try to take this and even some of the previous coments as food for thought for future works. Good luck!
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