|Reviews for Unfair|
| TiaFoyz chapter 1 . 5/16/2013
This is the most perfect thing I have ever read. Dear lord what have you just done to my ovaries. djieuhfijrgjfiru
BUT WHY ISN'T IT LONGER AND WHY DIDN'T SHE STAY YOU JUST BROKE MY HEART.
| CSIHuntermom chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
This is so good. I love how he said he wouldn't ask her to stay, she'd have to do it on her own.
The 'goodbye' part broke my heart too.
| PR Stella 926 chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
Do u plan to continue? Story is kinda short
| Dizzy-Dreamer chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
Goodbye... until next time, right? RIGHT?
My heart just broke. It's all your fault. sadface sadface.
| ccs chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
Great job! Please write more Mac/Stella.
| DNAisUnique chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
And exactly what happened. Yes, this is canon.
Thank you for writing this. It's just what I needed today. :)
| AliasCSINYFriendsER chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
No, it's a "see you later". ;o) I could create a way for her to come back and at least guest star because the way they acknowledged her leave was CRAPPY. LoL
This was beautiful...sad...but so beautiful. :o)
| pepperonyschueberry chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
AAWwww that was adorable, i still like reading people's stories about Stella's departure no one can screw it up except the writers of the show I tell you
good work :))
| Tricki chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
That was so beautiful but evil and awful and holy crap I need chocolate now! Or alcohol...
BROKE. MY. HEART!
But did so in an excessively wonderful way, so I might forgive you :P
| BAUMember chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
This was great loved it i can just picture it, please do more smacked as this was fab ...
| csiAngel chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
Wow! I love this so much! An excellent little piece. I could picture the whole thing. I felt Stella's hurt and Mac's panic and my heart skipped when she said "ask me to stay the night". A sad but beautiful little fic :) Thank you!
| Denese25 chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
I often wondered what their final scene together would have been like, had we been able to view it. This is just what I envisioned. Great job.