Reviews for Unfair
Kashtien James chapter 1 . 5/16/2013
This is the most perfect thing I have ever read. Dear lord what have you just done to my ovaries. djieuhfijrgjfiru
BUT WHY ISN'T IT LONGER AND WHY DIDN'T SHE STAY YOU JUST BROKE MY HEART.
CSIHuntermom chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
This is so good. I love how he said he wouldn't ask her to stay, she'd have to do it on her own.

The 'goodbye' part broke my heart too.

Great fic.
PR Stella 926 chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
Do u plan to continue? Story is kinda short
Dizzy-Dreamer chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
Goodbye... until next time, right? RIGHT?

My heart just broke. It's all your fault. sadface sadface.
ccs chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
Great job! Please write more Mac/Stella.
DNAisUnique chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
Very sweet.

And exactly what happened. Yes, this is canon.

Thank you for writing this. It's just what I needed today. :)
AliasCSINYFriendsER chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
No, it's a "see you later". ;o) I could create a way for her to come back and at least guest star because the way they acknowledged her leave was CRAPPY. LoL

This was beautiful...sad...but so beautiful. :o)

LOVED IT!

~mandi *_*
Faberry-n-Rizzlesgal chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
AAWwww that was adorable, i still like reading people's stories about Stella's departure no one can screw it up except the writers of the show I tell you

good work :))
Tricki chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
That was so beautiful but evil and awful and holy crap I need chocolate now! Or alcohol...

BROKE. MY. HEART!

But did so in an excessively wonderful way, so I might forgive you :P
BAUMember chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
This was great loved it i can just picture it, please do more smacked as this was fab ...
csiAngel chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
Wow! I love this so much! An excellent little piece. I could picture the whole thing. I felt Stella's hurt and Mac's panic and my heart skipped when she said "ask me to stay the night". A sad but beautiful little fic :) Thank you!
Denese25 chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
I often wondered what their final scene together would have been like, had we been able to view it. This is just what I envisioned. Great job.