|Reviews for Worth It|
| skywalker05 chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
"In her mind, she was writing a letter – A letter to Simon, and other AI, and anyone who wanted to know what life was really about. She wrote the letter as she began running, vaulting over sand dunes and debris. She was dotting her i's as she brought her fist into an Elite's head. The Spartan crossed her t's and x's while she gunned down Grunts and Jackals and eventually ran out of ammo. She proofread it as she stumbled, her strength fading into weariness and her pace faltering. "
I don't usually copy-paste entire things like that but that is a beautiful paragraph. As a writer I love the intimate connection you've got going on between letters and death.
Your AI is funny-"ODST Spring Training?" lol
I also love "even though I'm damn good at Lone Wolf, I'm even better in a pack."
And she gives herself the name of the planet-that's fascinating.
I like how you put things like "talking" and "learning to read" on her list of wars right there with army training, like all of them are just as natural and just as essential to her.
I'm glad I found your fics. _
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/12/2010
You should put that simon gets the letter somehow and his reaction
| kapbird chapter 1 . 11/7/2010