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| coolnessfighter chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
wow this was actualy good
| WeDidItForTheDead chapter 1 . 1/6/2011
Haha I have papers like that. And drawings. I make sure never to bring them to school. It would be very dramatic for him to see it htough it doesn't have anything really revealing on it.
| Tchabita A chapter 1 . 12/20/2010
Hmm... When IS your birthday anyway? xD
Well... I know I'm reverting back to my "Grammar Nazi" mode but I think a next to another period is grammatically incorrect... I think it can only be considered grammatically correct if it is an ellipsis (...) or a an ellipsis placed NEXT to a period (...) xD
In Rima's point of view : 'I swiftly turned around and hide the paper behind my back.' , shouldn't that be "hid" instead of "hide" to maintain the consistency of your verb tenses? xD
Make sure your sentences are REAL sentences next time okay? xD
Nice one. But this really seems to be an unfinshed story than a one - shot. I hope you make this into a series.
Keep it up! Have more stories! And if you'll listen to my plea, PLEASE UPDATE SOONER! xD :) :D
| sweet laya chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
ahh rima -_-' why cant you just tell him...
but this story was good
| Lala-chan chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
awww! so kawaii!
| forever.blue.skies chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
Aw. :) This was cute. I liked it! XD Rima sounds obsessive and in denial-ish. ;) Anyways, this was wonderful, and happy birthday XD
| Rikanchu chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
Rima-tan, he's hotter than the the sun, and you'll never know it. xDDD
ANYWAYS! THIS IS SERIOUSLY CUTE XDD And the ending is much HOTTER xDD OMG I'm going to faint *dramatic faints*
Anyways, HAPPY BIRTHDAY RIRI-CHI 8DD
| RakkiiHappiiDokkiiShidonii chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
RIMA-TAN'S A STALKER! O.O
Well, that's what it kinda seemed like. XD
This was super-cute! n.n
Nagi sparkles like Tada-chan. e.e I actually remember him sparkling in a few episodes...
Wow. That last sentence sounded so weird. O.-
"Hot" YES HE IS, RIMA-TAN! THERE'S NO DENYING HIS NAGILICIOUS-NESS!
... Please forgive me... I'm feeling kinda hyper right now. e.o'
Aw! U dedicated it to us. n.n KAKKOII. X3
P.S.: OMG WINKY NAGI! X'DXDXDXD
| Haruka Sumairu chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
This is so cute. I love the whole idea of it.
And thanks for dedicating it to me (and Shidonii)! But it was no problem at all for your birthday fics, we just love you so much. :)
But the part in the ending is just too good. Where he leans against a door frame, hands in his pockets, with one foot propped up? That's just DSAGABSGFIBSJAOIFLVDSBIL hotness. And winking? That's even more hot. -sigh-
Again, happy birthday Riri! :D
| greenluvr14 chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
before i start my review, happy birthday! this is really good, like all your other stories!