Reviews for Onward to Ruin
LokiFan56 chapter 10 . 5/29/2012
Heyyyyyyyyyyy. It's real good to see this story moving on! Though I hope the next story is coming soooooon. It's a very good story!
Hibikii chapter 1 . 5/23/2012
Rosa chapter 10 . 5/19/2012
This is a very good Chapter! Ah see? me english is getting better! You are very nice 2 :) I hav heard from me friends that you are sweet! And you are!
Rosa chapter 7 . 5/19/2012
Very gud chapter :) Your story is helping me english!
Rosa chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
I hope everything coming is together good! And I can't wait to get an account on here, it'll be fun! Sorry for me English :)
Baxtor chapter 10 . 5/18/2012
Great job on this Chapter. I really enjoy your writing and believe that you'll keep making even more great Chapters like this. And lol, don't worry about the other comments about Zack being to flirty, he was a player in FF7 Crisis Core. Lol.

Good job.

-Steig from WBU
Dextoria Fan chapter 10 . 5/16/2012
I hope Zack gets his morals straight TT_TT His slutty-ness is s-so out of character and claws me apart TT_TT Though I still have full faith in you! T_T Even though the scene still freaks me out.

-Love, Isabella
Dextoria Fan chapter 9 . 5/16/2012
WHOAAAAAAAAAA, this brings me back! My favorite part was when Hojo was looked at Zack. It would be interesting if Hojo got a hold to Zack :D I wonder what would Sephiroth do :D
Dextoria Fan chapter 8 . 5/16/2012
Awww I remember this scene, this is was a sweet scene with Aerith and Zack, even though I don't like her in the game,. for some reason she fits well when you give her a sister-like relationship with Zack :D
Dextoria Fan chapter 7 . 5/16/2012
Oh i love your writing skills! I hope you keep writing! This is amazing )
Dextoria Fan chapter 6 . 5/16/2012
Well ya got flirty Zack in character - Toooo flirty. Though good job!
Dextoria Fan chapter 5 . 5/16/2012
I was 100% sure that Zack was going to like have a break down infront of Sephiroth o.o... Maybe that's just me o.o

Your a really good writer! I still find no flaws in this story!
Dextoria Fan chapter 4 . 5/16/2012
This was a big shock at first o.o Knowing that Sephy had ACTUALLY put his trust in Zack? HAWT! BUT SWEEEEEEEET!
Dextoria Fan chapter 3 . 5/16/2012
Aw confused Sephiroth is so adorable D I think he and Zack will make a VERY good pair ;D He's so-so- what's the word, worrying about his feelings!
Dextoria Fan chapter 2 . 5/16/2012
Ohhhh yeah, Zacky seemed almost shy 3 Soooooo Kute!
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