|Reviews for The Art Teacher|
| Fleur50 chapter 14 . 7/23/2015
Un vrai conte de fée! J'adore!
| Fleur50 chapter 13 . 7/23/2015
| Fleur50 chapter 12 . 7/23/2015
| Fleur50 chapter 11 . 7/23/2015
| Fleur50 chapter 10 . 7/23/2015
| Fleur50 chapter 9 . 7/23/2015
| Fleur50 chapter 8 . 7/23/2015
| Fleur50 chapter 7 . 7/23/2015
| Fleur50 chapter 6 . 7/23/2015
C'est tellement touchant...
| Fleur50 chapter 5 . 7/23/2015
| Fleur50 chapter 4 . 7/23/2015
| Fleur50 chapter 3 . 7/23/2015
| Fleur50 chapter 2 . 7/23/2015
| Fleur50 chapter 1 . 7/23/2015
| Ella10 chapter 7 . 7/6/2015
I'm lousy with reviews but I had to leave one at the very least just to let you know that you've woven an insightful story. Chances are, you're already aware, but still. I admire the way that you managed to turn wealth into this suffocating trap that Bella's stuck in. Wealth is something that many people covet and Bella's life is something they would kill for. Yet you managed to present it in a different light that captures how empty it is. What with Rosalie's endless partying life that holds no meaning and Renee's tiring pursuit to keep everything she's worked for, it puts into perspective what matters in hindsight. I appreciate the depth you've put in this story, especially since it's so natural.
If I had to have one criticism, it would be the New Moon aspect of this story in which Bella lets Edward's departure from her life debilitate her. Though you wrote it in a smooth manner, I found it a bit unrealistic that she reacted with that much intensity with that little contact from Edward. I understand to some degree, of course, Edward's her soulmate. However, they only essentially spent one day together. It's a little hard to believe that this one day could alter her to the degree that it has. Nonetheless, it was written skillfully so for that I applaud you. I hope you've written more stories as I look forward to reading more of your work after finishing this.
Enjoying your writing,