|Reviews for The Art Teacher|
| WhatsMyNomDePlume chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
So glad you've started posting this, Spangles! And even more glad to be a teeny part of it :)
| ShadowFax999 chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
I love this already (as if I don't love all your works) but this one has something about it that I cant really describe yet, I want to use words like Beautiful and finesse, but I'm afraid if I use them prematurely they'll loose the desired effect. I feel like a character in you story, trying to find words to complete Edward's assignment. This is definitely not a story to be rushed so I patiently await your next chapter.
| hennokappa chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
I love the beginning for this story! The premise, and the characterization that you'd already built up, and your writing style in general is awesome. Looking forward to more from you!
| ajamm chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
This is really good :)
I can't wait for more.
| aramisette chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
*Happy Jumpy Claps* for your new fic! Love it already. And I knew exactly which Ophelia you mentioned without looking. Love that painting. I loved the art history classes I took in college. Learned so much.
| DICATAKADD chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
Man...you've already blessed us with a new story. Thanks!
I can't wait read more of the story...
| Aurabee chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
Fantastic beginning! I'm intrigued by them both.
| eternallyedward chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
I'm intrigued-looking forward to more.
| kylers143 chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
That was a great start. I can't wait to read more. That song, The Art Teacher, is super depressing, though. Hopefully, it was only an inspiration, and not the ending. I like these teacher/student, older Edward/ younger Bella stories. Can't wait for the next chapter.
| moonlightdreamer333 chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
Yay, new story. Such a lovely banner to help drool over this Edward. Ah, if only my art history professor had looked like that. Seriously, interesting start. I hope more art pieces will be discussed throughout. I love Millais's Ophelia. Interesting way to tell us so much about Bella's life and how she feels. You've already established such a strong connection between Edward and Bella. Looking forward to seeing where you go with this! Thanks for sharing.
| denverpopcorn chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
I love the word "curry" when used as a verb. I know, I know, I know.
The Rose characterization - strong and en pointe. She's beautifully rendered. I have a soft spot for Rose in fanfic.
"Iss", sounds like a "hiss", doesn't it? I wonder if someone will use it this way. Love to play with this on the tongue.
Oh, Art Teacherward, calls her out on "Ophelia". Of course, he would note that. Have you ever seen the '80s flick, Fire with Fire? Dudette, it is corny and, well 80s, but there is a scene wherein Virginia Madsen's character attends an all-girl Catholic school. She dabbles in photography and takes pictures of herself in a pond with lilies, a la "Ophelia". Yes, I am art-versed via 80s movies. At any rate, it is a pivotal scene because the hero discovers her doing these self-portraits and romantic flove ensues.
There is no point to my story, other than to show off my great movie brain and, oh yeah...GREAT FIRST CHAPTER.
| laura-1025 chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
All that's going through my head right now is Van Halen's "Hot For Teacher" LOL!
Definitely a great start and I'm really looking forward to learning more about these 2!
| LizHartzog5813 chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
Already love it! Can't wait for the next update!
| Lisa54aa chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
I like the set up here. Bella has already grown past her friends and she has a past. She is jaded and recognizes some sort of a connection but doesn't turn into a bumbling fool. I am curious to learn about Edward's backstory. Why is he such a big deal at such a young age and how on earth is he teaching at a school? I am really looking forward to the development of these characters and storyline.
| redemptionsong chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
You're like a machine, I have no idea how you keep managing to get stories out so fast, and really good quality ones too. Not that I'm complaining, I was excited to see a new story from you. I'm also glad to hear that it won't be that long, for purely selfish reasons - I want E & B to get together asap, lol.
I'm enjoying the start of this and looking forward to more :)