Reviews for The Tragic Beginning
LoveFromNightmares chapter 1 . 11/20/2010
awww! BEAUTIFUL! i keep reading it and reading it! i luv it :) keep up the good work!



King Caspian the Seafarer chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
Hurray! A Westmark Fanfiction!

This was very good-sad and chilling, and bringing again to mind the horrific murder of Theo's master. The way you used random (or not so random) words in a jarring sort of way adds to the effect beautifully. I love it. Write more if you get a chance. :)

Lion be with you,