|Reviews for Snakes and Deformed Hippos|
| Plains Hobbit chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
That last line is perfect.
Another well crafted fanfic.
The second and third paragraphs could use a little tightening up. They suffer from some clunky run-ons. Other than that, however, very well done.
| Kamaria Aislynn chapter 1 . 1/6/2011
Poor Harry. He has issues saying what he means sometimes. Silly boy. I do always picture Al as a Slytherin so I love that you made him one.
| Imperial Dragon chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
Thank goodness Harry didn't need drawing skills to defeat Voldermort.
| Scandalacious Intentions chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
I loved this. It was heartwarming and so realistic. My dad still talks to me like that too and I couldn't help but giggle. And I really liked the way you got into Harry's mind and the awkwardness was so well done.
| RedCloakedMaiden chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
I really, really enjoyed this. Adding to the archive!
| rm chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
harry is such a fool!...his explanations sound like something youll tell a 5 year old...but he is sweet...very harry-ish!:D...and al as an artist..thats a first...nice wrk!:D
| sarahm chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
| 123-321 chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
aww very cute