|Reviews for The Love in the Story|
| strawberry79 chapter 6 . 1/23/2013
I have just read this in full and just want to say i loved it.x
| Desiree chapter 6 . 6/8/2012
Loved it! Hannah's an awesome person, and this was a very nice 'classy exit as you put it. Anyway, congratulations on an epic story and good luck with your future writings!
| PrincessAlica chapter 6 . 3/15/2011
AWww I loved this story, but I am a complete sucker for happy endings! It was perfectly sweet!
| Katniss730 chapter 3 . 3/14/2011
I didn't read this story for a while, because, well there seemed to be a lot of Hannah in it! Now that she's gone from the show, I can read her name without cringing (mostly). Very interesting premise so far!
| blondevor chapter 6 . 3/7/2011
Just found this story and wanted to say how much I enjoyed it! I especially like that movie, telling of the story part - something different :)
Thanks for sharing!
| ceeray3 chapter 6 . 12/6/2010
I totally love how everyone is gathered to watch the show! I love this line, "Of course, I thought she must be some kind of idiot to let him go… imagine my surprise when I found out she was a certified genius." Love how she told him about the letter! (A personal thanks for acknowledging all soldiers.) She's pregnant! Love Max! I like how you used Hannah as the catalyst for B&B's relationship! I really loved this story Lori! I loved getting to see it in the making too! I had so much fun! Thank you for letting me be involved! [toast] Here's to many more!
| Bonezy The Squint chapter 6 . 12/1/2010
this was a great story! :D i loved who you ended booth and hannah!
| Alicia9876 chapter 6 . 11/28/2010
Loved this story and I agree that Hannah is a classy lady, I like her ok but I am ready for her to go on the show. I am discouraged that her 5 episodes has turned into more.
I am a little worried about Booth on the show. He has gotten a little snarky towards Bones. What is your take? I am worried about his relationships with all his friends. Then with the sniper arc coming will he completely crash? Is it Post Traumatic Stress from serving over seas again? He just doesn't seem like the same Booth. I think Brennan is trying to hold onto their friendship but he is isolating her. I guess only time will tell but the angst on the show is getting me down. So I LOVE shipper stories like this to keep me going. Thanks for writing. I wish this is what had happened on the show!
| lyssa414 chapter 6 . 11/28/2010
That was awesome! I loved it! Great job, please write more!
| marple chapter 6 . 11/25/2010
Nice story. I specially liked the beginning that Brennan got to tell him how she felt. I think that would have been good in the show too.
You are really nice to this season six Booths character and story. Imho in the show he is not likeable at all. You gave us back our old Booth.
I wish the show would have delt with the Hannah story this way too. It feels way more true to Booth and i couldve lived with it and stayed on watching without having to read comments before.
Thanks for sharing it with us.
| horseninja chapter 6 . 11/24/2010
I liked it. I agree about Hannah. Its not Hannah I have a problem with, its Hannah with Booth and Booth's attitude this season that I have a problem with. Even though B&B were both responsible for what happened in the 100th episode, I think Booth is more at fault especially because he can only see his own pain and doesn't seem to notice hers. All he heard was "no" and nothing else apparently. I hope someone calls him on it before I lose patience with the show entirely!
| Aching Bones chapter 6 . 11/24/2010
Just read from start to finish and I loved it...I was really so sorry for Bones when she first admitted to Booth that she loved him and then Hannah walked in...I thought all along that Hannah was going to be trouble with this story she was going to write about them, but loved the last chapter...'The love in the story'...Lol! And George Clooney too! BB are definitely a love story...Had to love how nobody knew who they were but obviously those who really knew them would know...not just their friends and family but others who worked with them...I have no doubt that in time, the identities of these two hot people would be leaked on the web somewhere...
| kaz chapter 6 . 11/24/2010
it was so good i loved it
| MiseryMaker chapter 6 . 11/23/2010
No fair! I want to throw a complete tantrum! It's OVER just when I caught up? Sigh...
Loved that Hannah wrote that story she'd learned about and that it was so wildly successful. Adored the way you pulled their family around them to watch the interview.
Booth would be unbearable to live around if he knew Clooney was playing him in a movie. You didn't make him obnoxious enough about that-LOL!
Sigh... This was a lovely story start to finish. I'll read anything you write about anyone on Bones. PROMISE!
| MiseryMaker chapter 5 . 11/23/2010
Awwwww... Booth's gift for her had me all teary-eyed! And I think it's more than realistic that Booth (if not Bones) would want to take the more traditional route to courting.
Sigh... The symbolism of the carousel was remarkable. And the happy contrast to the sad time they sat there drawing that unnecessary line was lovely.
I LOVE THIS STORY!