|Reviews for The Key|
| Kalinysta chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
I'm rather flabbergasted at how good this story is. I agree with all of the comments of the other reviewers. You certainly have captured what goes on in a 10 or 11-year-old boy's head with regard to guns.
Curious to know if you got the idea of this from Season 4 Episode 2 of MacGyver where it shows why he hated guns so much.
Anywho... good job. I would also like to add that you write well, and I especially appreciate the attention to grammar, spelling and punctuation.
More please? pretty please? with pie? pie ala mode?
| Romas1912 chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
You wrote this so well. Hardly anybody touches this subject matter, and your story was very good. Poor Charlie.
| PatriciaS chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
Sad and nicely done. And so right about kids feelings at that age. Thanks for sharing.
| froggy0319 chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
Knowing how it turns out, this was so sad and so on the mark as kids today are just too curious for their own good and this kind of tragedy still happens in real life :(