Reviews for Black and Gray Morality
phionexxx chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
I cannot stop grinning like an idiot xD the ending is the best thing I've read in a while!
CherenxN lover chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
OMG so cute -
Mystia Katsuragi chapter 1 . 1/28/2012
I thought it was pretty good. o-o
Sieria chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
I really can't forget those two sentences

even after weeks and months.

The first one was "N placed a hand on Cheren's shoulder, and with the other hand, tilted his head up, dark eyes meeting gray."

This one was just good, and the next one was, just perfect.

"Cheren refused to believe that charcoal was a color."

I even mumble 'Cheren refused to believe that charcoal was a color.' in school sometimes.

Also, I liked these words and sentences too-"Cheren was also an exception to that rule, with his dark charcoal eyes. N had coined them." "A game, that was all." "Cheren spluttered and his cheeks flamed with a delicious pink color that N came to enjoy causing." "Cheren came back after two weeks. His black eyes-not black, more of a midnight blue- were accented with a glimmer of depression." "He would take him, toy and play with his emotions, drop a kiss or two, and send him on his way." " N never felt pity. It wasn't his fault. Cheren kept coming back for more, and N couldn't blame him." " His gray gaze was exotic in a world of colorful eyes, where blue and green prevailed over all."
wow chapter 1 . 5/18/2011
well, this was one of the best yaoi oneshots i have ever read, i love it and i hope you write another one!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/7/2011
*Fangirl squel* oooh I absolutely loved itt! ;D ;D I want some moree gimme more plez? XD I can understand why you'd wanna keep it a oneshott, the way you ended it was pretty awesome xD but I stil want moreee ;o; if you get a little time or need to dispel a writers block or summat,, give us more? :L xD seriousluy thoughh lol I thoughtt it was really goodd 8D ;D b
Nyurt chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
Hnng yes; here let me feed you reviews.

First of all, you write beautifully. I'll admit I will not read a story to its end if the grammar is incorrect, or there's a lack of vocabulary/word repetition. So bravo on that.

Secondly: HAHAHA we never really do see these two interact, but I love how you played them out. Cheren would try to up N, and N would probably own him with little to no effort. Poor guy though; Cheren seems like the type to reeaallyy want a girl, go all out, and then lose her to the more friendly-outgoing competitor.

All in all, nice work. More PKMN fics pleaasee. :3
Purrugly chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
W-o-w! Gosh, I'd kill for a second chapter. I know you probs want to keep this a oneshot, but boy. This is good.
Luna Tiger chapter 1 . 11/12/2010
AllWrongshipping with a smidgen of Cheren/Bel?

...3 Awww. I liked it.
arisu rin chapter 1 . 11/11/2010
Don't despair, I fail at writing yaoi, too. The only time I've written one, was for Bijouie who wanted a Axel/Roxas. asdfghjkl...I was brain dead for a while. And it's good to write things out of your comfort zones sometimes. You'll gain more experience and you'll be a heck lot better than you already were. (Which I find impossible. :D)

But this is good, I really really liked it. :D
sakura-fai chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
...it's good, but i'm not a fan of yaoi, so i couldn't stomach for more than 4 paragraphs. x( sorry, but good job writing. Not bad for a beginner. -_- I've read yaoi before cause of friends too, and yours is one of the better ones.