|Reviews for Day 246|
| thetempestrising chapter 1 . 1/6
Wow. This story is written really well, and it brings up a lot of emotions that I can't seem to name. This is one of the best sad TF2 pieces I've seen anywhere. There were a few really small grammatical errors and places where it could have flowed better, but other than that this is amazing.
Great job! Good luck with any future pieces.
| oceanlover4evr chapter 1 . 3/14/2013
Oh FUCk, that brought tears to my eyes.
So, I thought at first this was one of those asylum AUs but it wasn't and now I can't stop crying why. And I'm supposed to be working on a chemistry freaking graph and I can't stop thinking about how each person was so completely destroyed. Honestly, once it sunk in what had happened to them, I... argh.
*Sniffles* Was it the meds, or did the Administrator do that to them? Gah, whhhhhyyyyyy?
| DeidaraHoshika chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
Wow. Just wow.
| SGTFledge chapter 1 . 6/25/2011
I've read many stories that tap into many of the emotions a human can experience, but this one...
Amazing? Astounding? Sorrowful? I cannot find the perfect word for the storm of emotions that this story brewed. Each of the characters is portrayed nearly perfectly, and the roles...it's just saddening. How through all the joy taken from the slaughter they end up in such a state.
While there were a few grammar issues, the story itself and the need to keep reading made them nonexistent. Great work.
| Advisor Irk chapter 1 . 12/1/2010
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 11/13/2010
I cried. I've read this on tf2chan a few times, and I still get teary! It's so heartbreaking to imagine them like that. Especially medic's part in it all! It's so depressing. :(
| Totenkinder Madchen chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
This was poignant, bitter, tragic, and brilliant-a combination I've never yet seen in a video game 'fic, period. The thought of Scout confined to a wheelchair was probably the worst; if he can't run, what is he? And the sad thing is, I get the impression that the Administrator really would do something like this. They're interchangeable pawns in the RED versus BLU war, and you can't have them running around.
Well done. Sad, but so well done.
| Dr. von Stab chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
Well, I'm glad that it's at least the Medic who is taking care of them. I guess it really is better if they don't know.
| ArmoredSoul chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
Pardon me while I go and bawl in the corner.
First memory loss Dell, then there's Spy, and Pyro and-
Oh God Scout...
And then the ending-!
CONSARNIT, YOU ARE MAKING ME VERY SAD FACE.
This story is awesome.
| kim chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
This was very good! NicEly done! It has a realistic feeling of what happened after the war, even though it's tragic I like it!
I can't put it in words but Great job! I enjoyed reading this thanks!