|Reviews for The Eyes|
| ZeGabz chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
If you want to post original works, go to Fictionpress. This is good though.
| aaa chapter 2 . 3/10/2011
this is genuinely good, and very suspenseful. really vivid details, as well. only one thing, you can post these on instead, it's a sister site of fanfiction and it's for original writing.
| me chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
wow that was an amazingly creepy story. great suspense. i'm always excited when i find something original on here. keep writing!