|Reviews for The Years Have Turned To Dust In My Hands|
| AffyRainbws chapter 1 . 7/17
Man, I was so excited after stalking your profile to find this, so happy that I had some more if this story to read but now I just feel empty inside and it's hard to breath. This broke my heart in a way that I just feel pain but can even bring myself to cry. I never imagined a few thousand words could hurt me so much, and for that I guess I thank you
| Superpotterwholockiscool chapter 1 . 4/27
This broke my heart. Oh my freaking screaming hell. Noooooo. Even though I'm glad you wrote something more form Jasper's POV, this one shot/alternate ending is devastating. I adore you.
| Drithligh chapter 1 . 10/31/2016
Even though I love angst, I don't really enjoy tragedies. Edward's pain seems so pointless and Bella's life so shallow. Love the writing, though. It made me cry.
| FangirlFanatic01 chapter 1 . 3/22/2016
Beautiful, that's all I have too say, you have such a bautiful way with words! I am compleatly hooked onto your story an I'm sad I didn't get to see it finish. This alternative ending is utterly heart-breaking, I'm glad you didn't choose I ho this route. Your style of writing is magnificent, for a moment I forgot that what you had written wasn't how the real books played out! If you ever see this, please I beg you, continue this story with its happy ending
| Serpentine66 chapter 1 . 9/28/2015
This ending was so sad. Even though you didn't finish the other one I still like it MUCH better.
| Ealasaid Una chapter 1 . 9/9/2015
| Mandarin Fiend chapter 1 . 1/27/2015
So so so sad! I hope that in this alternate timeline when Bella inevitably finds out that Edward is dead that she is still able to go on with Jake.
| yikes chapter 1 . 11/18/2014
Thk god you didnt go this route
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/2/2014
I was crestfallen when I read the summary my heart crack when i read the Cullen's have parted but when I read the suffering and death of Edward my heart shattered your writing was utterly beautiful that I actually forgot that it isn't real I was in agony when I read this I thought that Edward's still alive and they'll live happily ever after but no you should be poud because I found it beautiful because I live in a family of writers and I was touch i wish no one in this life would ever experience such agonizing pain
| elizi02 chapter 1 . 5/7/2014
I kinda regret reading this..
That was utterly heartbreaking. :'(
| Myystikal chapter 1 . 1/25/2014
Ouch, right in the heart :(
| GabrielsDoubt chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
Wow. Honestly, this could have been just as adequate an ending to the story as the happier one you have chosen to continue.
| flowerpower55 chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
That is so heart wrenching. My only comfort is that it isn't really what happened. I deny any reality where Edward and Bella aren't happily together in the end. Can't wait!
| kiwihipp chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
What a sad (for Edward and the Cullens) but happy (for Bella and Jacob) alternative. I don't quite know if I like it or not. But great to see that the story could have gone another way!
| Obscured Angel chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
That was really sad, but I'm glad you wrote this anyway.