Reviews for The last Dive
AccountIsDeactivated111 chapter 1 . 4/11/2011
Umm, I think that they shouldn't all be committing suicide in your stroies. No offense but it really needs a twist. The series always makes the death different to what you thought so you have to have the reader confused at the end. Your a good author but you need spaces and paragraphs. Keep working on it. :D

This girl could have been pushed but that would have been boring. Maybe, someone held her under water at the end... she just didn't remember it! :)