Reviews for Who do I Wanna Be?
HappyBunny855 chapter 6 . 10/24/2011
Omg this story is so so so so so good! I lOve it and I can't wait for you to post more chapters!
AliceCullen4eternity chapter 6 . 10/4/2011
you go lovinRayne. Some people just don't realize how stupid their being when they flame, you pointed out said stupidity. I think you do a very good job writing this story and it is for fun it's not being sold a Barnes& Nobles
AliceCullen4eternity chapter 5 . 10/4/2011
Omg I love Greek Mythology! My middle name is Psyche who was the wife of Eros and the goddess of the soul. Hermes is hilarious. I can't wait to what Zeus and Ares do. Poor Bella she has been through hell. Love the chapter!
1DWhoLocked chapter 6 . 9/7/2011
I had a feeling for like 3 seconds before reading the chapt interducing who her family was, that was 'OMG! what if her parents were like the gids or something!' a lot of times i just have a feeling like that and it comes true, i think i have Peter's gift of 'just knowing (quote) shit' anyyyways, please write more soon!
Kim Ginsberg chapter 6 . 9/2/2011
I need more please
Kim Ginsberg chapter 5 . 9/2/2011
oh shit
Kim Ginsberg chapter 4 . 9/2/2011
aw hell
Kim Ginsberg chapter 3 . 9/2/2011
aw fuck
Kim Ginsberg chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
omg
scareDcat chapter 2 . 8/18/2011
It's such a shame that you didn't continue with this especially as you said you had 5 more chapters already written.

I love any PB&J stories ~ this one would have been great xx
lexi-tomlinson-styles5 chapter 6 . 8/12/2011
plz make more this is one of my favorite stories!and you haven't writen in a plz:):):):):):)
Jacks159 chapter 6 . 8/3/2011
I really like this story. I hope you continue it and just tell People to go away when they are mean. Just as a suggestion I would make some things more clear and move the story line along a litte bit other than that it is really good. Hope you don't take that the wrong way. :) JBear
lexi-tomlinson-styles5 chapter 5 . 7/16/2011
Amazing!I would love to read more!when is the next post coming out?Love it!
InSaNtIy-Is-EvErYtHiNg chapter 5 . 7/2/2011
awesomeness please upload soon
theunnoticedgirl chapter 2 . 6/29/2011
Well that's nice it cut me off. . stupid iPod.

Anyway continuation of likes:

-bellas brothers seeming to be badass but have an obvious soft spot for Bella

-the way the story will eventually go (or the way I assume it will be going)

-lots of other stuff that I cantthink of cuz it's 3am but yeah :)

Dislikes:

-seems rushed

-alot happens in 5 chapters it is hard to keep up with.

-weak Bella

-only cuz I think the girls should be the hero :) lol Jk (kinda)

-Bella's family tree

-it's just confusing (suggestion: maybe you could have bella peter and Jasper have a convo about it so they [and your readers] can further understand it

-"Chapter 6"

- what that review was was constructive criticism. Yes it's still criticism but it was one that you could learn from. See their dislikes and if you wish then ask them why and not yell at them in a A/N. There are some people who just don't like what we write and they wanna let you know it. There are also those who make co ments or leave reviewed to help you better your story. That doesn't necessarily mean they don't like it but they know it has the potential to get better.

Well it's late and I'm sooo tired lol so I'll finishy review tomorrow nite _

~Onyx
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