|Reviews for Who do I Wanna Be?|
| Obsessed-with-reading chapter 3 . 11/10/2010
Ok , i Think i should post s review to this awesome story ;D you have done an amazing Job ;p
Pleace update soon
| sonyabrady1971 chapter 3 . 11/10/2010
LOVE THE UPDATE! :-)
| winter delight chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
can't wait to read more and see where this story is going and to get the back story about how it started.
| goldfishie1 chapter 2 . 11/9/2010
Good so far. I like Jasper/Bella/Peter fics. Looking forward to more.
| brokenlove81 chapter 2 . 11/9/2010
really good start. can't wait for the next chapter
| lanna-misssunshine chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
So I tried to start reading the story, but really, it's nearly impossible to read seeing as you haven't split it up into paragraphs. I couldn't even make it past the first quarter of the story, it was like torture for my eyes (seriously, go try and read the chapter yourself and you'll understand what I mean).
Basically, I can't really tell if the story is good or not - and I'm usually a sucker for Jasper/Bella stories - because it's not exactly readable right now. I'll add it to story alert and try reading again if you fix the format (it's easy enough, it lets you edit the documents on your fanfic home page thing where you upload the chapters).
| fallunder chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
I liked the chapter. I love the dynamic of P/B/J. i have no issue with Charlie being abusive. So sad about Bella- I felt for her, nice descriptive writing. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
| popila chapter 2 . 11/9/2010
my suggestions: i have two options: 1. alice saw all of this and did nothing - she is a real bitch or 2. bella shield works better
oh and please... no E&A :-D in so many B&J stories they end up together :-(
but it's your story, you know better what to write ;-)
| AshyGrace chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
kinda wierd but in a good way any cant wait to see where this is going!
| popila chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
i have so many questions. where is alice? why didn;t she see all of this? what about Edward...? ahe isn't pregnant, right?
| Calliso chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
Nice start so far! I admit I am not sure if I like the abusive Charlie since I guess I find it a little hard to believe you know? But other then that I am enjoying it. Though I have to wonder if Bella is Jaspers and Peters mate why did Jasper leave in the first place? Or did was he perhaps in denial? Maybe he was still with Alice and didn;t think his feelings for Bella were apporpriate? Or didn;t realize what they were at first? I guess that is the big question I have for this chapter.
| sonyabrady1971 chapter 2 . 11/9/2010
just found this...I love what you have so far and can't wait for more
| amberosia1 chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
love the story bravo
| Perminatly Lost In Thought chapter 2 . 11/9/2010
i just copied and pasted your story to a word document so I could edit it I will email it to you and please get back to me if you like how I fixed it up!
| lovinRayne chapter 1 . 11/9/2010