Reviews for Who do I Wanna Be?
Kim Ginsberg chapter 3 . 9/2/2011
aw fuck
Kim Ginsberg chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
omg
scareDcat chapter 2 . 8/18/2011
It's such a shame that you didn't continue with this especially as you said you had 5 more chapters already written.

I love any PB&J stories ~ this one would have been great xx
lexi-tomlinson-styles5 chapter 6 . 8/12/2011
plz make more this is one of my favorite stories!and you haven't writen in a plz:):):):):):)
jaxwrites101 chapter 6 . 8/3/2011
I really like this story. I hope you continue it and just tell People to go away when they are mean. Just as a suggestion I would make some things more clear and move the story line along a litte bit other than that it is really good. Hope you don't take that the wrong way. :) JBear
lexi-tomlinson-styles5 chapter 5 . 7/16/2011
Amazing!I would love to read more!when is the next post coming out?Love it!
InSaNtIy-Is-EvErYtHiNg chapter 5 . 7/2/2011
awesomeness please upload soon
theunnoticedgirl chapter 2 . 6/29/2011
Well that's nice it cut me off. . stupid iPod.

Anyway continuation of likes:

-bellas brothers seeming to be badass but have an obvious soft spot for Bella

-the way the story will eventually go (or the way I assume it will be going)

-lots of other stuff that I cantthink of cuz it's 3am but yeah :)

Dislikes:

-seems rushed

-alot happens in 5 chapters it is hard to keep up with.

-weak Bella

-only cuz I think the girls should be the hero :) lol Jk (kinda)

-Bella's family tree

-it's just confusing (suggestion: maybe you could have bella peter and Jasper have a convo about it so they [and your readers] can further understand it

-"Chapter 6"

- what that review was was constructive criticism. Yes it's still criticism but it was one that you could learn from. See their dislikes and if you wish then ask them why and not yell at them in a A/N. There are some people who just don't like what we write and they wanna let you know it. There are also those who make co ments or leave reviewed to help you better your story. That doesn't necessarily mean they don't like it but they know it has the potential to get better.

Well it's late and I'm sooo tired lol so I'll finishy review tomorrow nite _

~Onyx
theunnoticedgirl chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
Ok so I have to admit I Like And dislike your story.

Loves:

-PB&J (yummy ;)

-possession from the mates makes me :)

-your an aspiring author like me (even though my story sucks ass)

-bella's family

-though a lil confusing I will admit.

-bi-polar bella

-how bella's brother seem badass but have a s
CHITTLE0915 chapter 6 . 6/6/2011
I'm liking it. It has a wierd blend of greek mythology and twilight that I wouldn't normally like, but it works here. Keep up the good work! Can't wait til ares makes an appearance.
Heeyooo chapter 6 . 3/18/2011
This is cool as hell especially since there are gods! :D
bodah chapter 3 . 2/3/2011
Aww, i am disapointed. the first chapter was so good, held such promise, but then you added all these extraneous characters. i hate that, it ruins so many stories.
LilIzzy chapter 6 . 2/2/2011
Please update soon love it
fallon0627 chapter 6 . 1/21/2011
ok a few questions.

1. Is jasper and and the other guy also intimate or is it just about sharing bella

2. Is bella more than human

3. are you going to cont. story
Whitlocklover32 chapter 6 . 1/15/2011
This story has an interesting plot-line so far.
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