|Reviews for The 12 Stones|
| Jayce Signmorou chapter 6 . 12/16/2010
Great chap man, thanx 4 the shout out. I liked what you did, especially to Jayce. Hid hair shiksa been blue that woulda been cool but red makes more sense. Any way keep writing am I
| Cookie Puppy chapter 1 . 11/20/2010
Your grammar and puncuation aren't too good, so get a beta for that.
| Jayce Signmorou chapter 5 . 11/20/2010
Again, great chapter but...
DETAIL AND DESCRIPTION!
Also, when are they gonna get to camp?
| Jayce Signmorou chapter 4 . 11/17/2010
Very good, but your chapters need to be longer. You also need a lot more detail and to make fights longer and better, you also need to describe people and places. Not to be a jerk but make it more like a book. It's a good plot though.
| Jayce Signmorou chapter 3 . 11/9/2010
Holy crap, this chapter was pretty short but what I did was badass, it didn't really show lava powers and you didn't really get into the fight scene but still it was great. You should make the chapters longer and add more detail and make longer fights but still very good and this was just an introductury chapter anyway so notta big deal, keep up the good work.
| Jayce Signmorou chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
Yay, first to review
| Jayce Signmorou chapter 2 . 11/9/2010
Great start to the story, I enjoy that your using us as the main characters, and nice idea with the whole school expulsion thing.