Reviews for Going Local
Kermy1513 chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
This was really good! I loved Edward's song choice and Bella's boldness. Awesome! :]
loulouau chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
Cute story.
NKubie chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
Sweet. At least he knows enough about her to try to find her now. In my mind, he'll do just that. :)
TwiAggie94 chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
Sweet and a little sad. - meg
wackynicolecsu chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
omg awesome...I think you should make this more then a one shot, have him go find her, he has enough information! Loved it
LastRedAppleStanding chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
AWWWW That was so bloody cute :D xxxx
CompletelyCullenized chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
Forget this being a one shot! Make him go and visit her at H&M!

This was unbelievably cute! I loved it!
dopey5of6 chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
you should continue this story. I really liked it.
laurafc1107 chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
¡Me encanta! tengo debilidad por las historias que pasan en el metro/tren, y esta es de las más bonitas que he leído... aunque me gustaría que continuara durante uno o dos capítulos más... pero bueno, así está perfecta, también! ¡Gracias mil!
fanfictionalcolic chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
Ohhhhhh, too bad it's an OS I would like to have more!
ellis1516 chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
Would LOVE if this story was added to a bit more - im not talking a thousand chapters maybe . . 2 or 3

he so has to go the H&M and find her PLEASE!
1sarina chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
oh no! nononon c'mon!

another chapter pretty please! it can't and here! c'mon let them have a little moreeeee...and us too!


another chap just another one!
futuregirl1709 chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
Awwww, that's such a sweet and cute story! Wouldn't you consider continuing it? :)

I loved your selfconscious Edward! Too shy to ask for her number, that's so adorable. And Bella, all confident and kissing beautiful strangers, so different, but in a good way!

Your story made me smile! Thank you!
fearlessnot chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
very cute and sweet. Loved it.
Wastintime chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
So lovely. I always adore your characterizations.
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