|Reviews for Going Local|
| laurafc1107 chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
¡Me encanta! tengo debilidad por las historias que pasan en el metro/tren, y esta es de las más bonitas que he leído... aunque me gustaría que continuara durante uno o dos capítulos más... pero bueno, así está perfecta, también! ¡Gracias mil!
| fanfictionalcolic chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
Ohhhhhh, too bad it's an OS I would like to have more!
| ellis1516 chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
Would LOVE if this story was added to a bit more - im not talking a thousand chapters maybe . . 2 or 3
he so has to go the H&M and find her PLEASE!
| 1sarina chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
oh no! nononon c'mon!
another chapter pretty please! it can't and here! c'mon let them have a little moreeeee...and us too!
another chap just another one!
| futuregirl1709 chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
Awwww, that's such a sweet and cute story! Wouldn't you consider continuing it? :)
I loved your selfconscious Edward! Too shy to ask for her number, that's so adorable. And Bella, all confident and kissing beautiful strangers, so different, but in a good way!
Your story made me smile! Thank you!
| fearlessnot chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
very cute and sweet. Loved it.
| Wastintime chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
So lovely. I always adore your characterizations.
| Ivygirl702 chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
Gah. This was adorable!
Thanks for sharing!
| reddish.ruse chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
Well this was absolutely adorable. I'm sad about the "FIN" haha, I wish it just kept going forever! What a nice change from a shy and reserved Bella - I liked this one very much. Also, I want this to happen to me. I don't write at all, but I always have the idea of two people meeting on a bus/subway/train/etc. and one listening to music and the other pausing it or turning it up/down because they want to talk or like the song. I don't know why - I'm weird. And it would be so creepy if the person wasn't perfect, but if it was a Twilight fanfiction, of course it would be. COOL ANYWAY cute one-shot, I really enjoyed it!
| twilight-is-lovee chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
Dawwwh. That was so very adorable. :D
So, I always promise myself that I won't ask the author to continue their one-shot, and I usually do stick to that promise. Sometimes, though, I have to break it. This is definitely one of those times.
Sooo, ummm, you should expand this into a two-shot or something in which they meet again and actually... I dunno... get each others' numbers and promise to call or even go out or something... ;)
| revrag chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
Awww, I liked it! It was very sweet! Great job!
| Koshivuh chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
| MissRe chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
Awwww... LOL Technically the 4 going Locally would only take about an hour... and the D is closer... ;) I really loved this story though - I wish the subway were empty a little more because I would love to bust out a tune or two myself. Loved Bella and her interaction with Edward... and he does know where she works... LOL Awesome job!
| Lurecyka chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
Don't you think that this could be the start of a wonderful story ? I just love this and I'm always so happy to read something from you ! Hope to read you again soon :)
| MarchHare5 chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
I like to think that because he knows where she works, they'll find each other again. :)