Reviews for Going Local
maeyourskiesbeblue chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
This is adorable, and I'd love it if you continued with it. Maybe have Edward track her down. So cute. :)
Mell C chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
It was a long day and I just want to go to bed- but then I saw your one shot in my box. Had to read it. What a sweet and happy way to end my day. Thank you! I'm off to sleep and hopefully have sweet dreams.
AbruptlyChagrined chapter 1 . 11/9/2010

Wow this is so good.

In my mind, he tracks her down at H&M and refuses to let that be a one-time kiss.
mommymac0508 chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
How beautifully sweet I loved it
grrrr.edward chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
ugh bananas! soooooooo good as always!
HighClassDesertTrash chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
Loved this would have loved it more if it wasn't just a oneshot oh well
ilovealion chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
Sweet! A story to tell their grankids :)
Nutta4444 chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
~~~ Awesome little story :-) loved it but it went to quick :-) ~~~
lisamichelle17 chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
I loved the prompt to Going Local. Thank you, for writing and sharing it with us. A few of my thoughts:

1) I really love that it was set in NYC. It is my favorite city in the world to visit and someday I will live there. I love that you wrote the differences between the local and express. I made the mistake of taking the 2 express once. My stop was at 103rd but the express took me to 125th. I don't think I've ever been more scared in my life to be in the Bronx.

2) I also really love that your Edward loves music and sings when he is by himself on the subway. I have a love of music and I always have to catch myself singing when I am surrounded by others.

3) I also have to admit that I have noticed when there is a couple on the subway and I am by myself.

4) I also was equally loved how Edward met Bella. The felt like they were kindred spirits. I loved that Bella asked Edward for a picture and that she was bold enough to kiss him.

I have to admit that I would love to see this continued but if that isn't planned, don't worry. This one shot was perfect to me.

Thank you, for sharing it with us, again.
TallulahBelle chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
I've got a goofy grin on my face from this story.

In my head these two run into each other again, and again, and again until they decide it's time to go for a cup of coffee.

As always, you give me entertainment and food for thought with a few words.

hotmama4jd chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
You must be a new yorker. You description of the subway, MTA and the trains were right on.

That was a sweet/bittersweet/fun story. I imagine that they meet again later and both still have their pictures.
xXxhurting-insidexXx chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
Awwwwwwwwh, That Was Soo Cute!

GRRRRR, Please Update Soon On

"The Missing letters" ...I NEED To Know

What Happens...
Edlovesme chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
Awe Edward is smarter than the average bear, looking at the name tag, very observant.
coxie chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
Very cute. :)
Erikajo chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
Awwww, SO sweet! :)
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