|Reviews for Daphnia|
| vampire beast chapter 1 . 10/28/2011
Hey man, really good. I think it could of had a few more details, but the story line is really good. I advise you to try writing a few more stories, maybye about Matt's and his girlfiend's kids. Just a sugestion.
| Riquez Oro chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
Well written, nicely done...
| SkyStealer chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
| Gaeliss chapter 1 . 11/23/2010
Awwww! Gives a marvelous backstory. The first couple seconds I was like "what?" but gradually I realized it was Matt's birth! Keep that element of realization, not only does it make readers feel smart, but it helps the flow of the story. If you tell the reader what's happening all the time, they'll get bored with the story. (In the same way, don't get too vague. But don't worry, there was a balance here!)
Congrats on the only especially long fanfic on Airborn!
| YesIEatQuiche chapter 1 . 11/20/2010
First review! :D
Aw this was sweet. A very good idea for a one-shot imo. Good job