Reviews for I Never Knew
The-Kelli-Rose chapter 23 . 4/13/2013
I absolutely loved your story! It's so well written. The best I've seen in a while. Thank you for sharing your talent. -Kelli
bella0609 chapter 23 . 4/8/2013
What a fabulous ride! I really enjoyed your story! Thanks for sharing. I love the twists in the story and the characters. Please continue to write!
bella0609 chapter 22 . 4/8/2013
I forgot Lonnie had a gold car. I thought it was Renee's. I wonder what the story was between Edward and Lonnie though! I hope Edward is okay. I'm guessing he is - hopefully, you have given us a HEA!
bella0609 chapter 21 . 4/8/2013
Although I am all for forgiveness... Bella forgave a little too easily. Renee should at least pay for everything she broke! :)
bella0609 chapter 20 . 4/8/2013
Edward couldn't have killed Charlie. He would have been arrested. Of course it was an accident. He loved Charlie. Just a misunderstanding. Bella should wait and give Edward a chance to explain...
bella0609 chapter 19 . 4/8/2013
Bella should tell him how she feels...He's had more loss than her so he's more vulnerable...
bella0609 chapter 18 . 4/8/2013
They needed that! I hope they didn't do it because of Renee though
bella0609 chapter 17 . 4/8/2013
That's quite a statement for Bella to make in front of the police about Renee...
bella0609 chapter 16 . 4/8/2013
Poor Edward... No mother, lost his father, now Charlie. It just never ends for him. No wonder he's seeing a therapist. Loved this line: "Don't be shy," he says. I can hear the smile in his voice. "Last night I shared my banana with you. It shouldn't be a big deal to wake up next to me." He laughs.
bella0609 chapter 15 . 4/8/2013
Very nice, with a great surprise! I was wondering when they were going to kiss for 'real'. Loved it :)
bella0609 chapter 14 . 4/8/2013
Oh yes! Perfect :)
How old are they?
bella0609 chapter 13 . 4/8/2013
If I were Bella, I'd be confused...
Does Edward think she's trying to make him a distraction for what happened with her mother? He should have communicated that to her in some other way, maybe? I think she's too upset right now to understand anyway...
bella0609 chapter 12 . 4/8/2013
I'm having a proud moment for Bella as well. I almost thought she couldn't do it. But, I am so glad she did!
bella0609 chapter 11 . 4/8/2013
What would Edward have to say...what happened that he needs to say?
Renee! Where's Edward now?
bella0609 chapter 10 . 4/8/2013
Bella took a big step by touching Edward's lips...
I'm guessing that it did more to Edward than Bella knows...
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