|Reviews for I Never Knew|
| sunnydon7 chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
| nvrsrry chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
I'm really excited for this story to get started. I can't wait to see where you'll take us with these two.
| laura-1025 chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
Well, well, well - look at you not confirming my suspicions until the very last sentence, haha!
LOVED this chapter so much, what a great start! I'm completely intrigued to find out more about Bella, who Charlie actually was, why Renee kept Charlie a secret and how Copward is going to be brought into Bella's life.
Squeeeee! I'm so excited you're giving us a new story and I'm totally along for the ride, bb!
| jansails chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
Aaahhh...so bella doesn't know her biological father at all?
I always think the mothers who keep their childrens' true parentage secret should be shot.
Even if the guy is a criminal, everyone deserves to know the truth, the origin of their DNA.
And is Edward the one who folded the flag?
| SleepMyBella chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
Wow! I really like this so far. Your writing is lovely. I can't wait to read more!
| Cullenosopy chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
Great start, sounds like Bella was adopted. Thanks!
| fanofbones chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
First and foremost, it was beautifully written. Sad, at first I thought it might be Edward in the coffin.
Then for it to be Charlie, well, I have a fuckload of questions ;)
So! Renee and hubbs lied to Bella about her father all those years? Huh
Fuckhot visual: Edward in uniform with long-fingered white gloves...dam-um
| hyacinthgirl18 chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
Starting from the beginning, I really connect with your Bella and like the way you've portrayed her here. Both her need to be in control of everything and her fear of not, and her need to know at the end.
As for the funeral, I had tears in my eyes. My dad's a cop, actually, so I'm really hoping I never need to learn about that experience in person. It was beautiful and touching and haunting nonetheless.
I'll look out for your next chapter. Thanks!
| DJUBS chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
As usual, you never disappoint.
| belladonna1472 chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
Great start, Caren! I'm really intrigued already. Thank you for posting on my bday! :)
| twimom143 chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
This was amazing! Able to hold one's attention from the get go!
| lippylou chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
Interesting start to the story. I'm making assumptions in my own head about what's happened and at this stage I'm keeping them there. Sounds like Bella is a bit of a control freak too. Interesting twists.
Looking forward to more.
| brannis87 chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
I'm intrigued by the story, this is going to be interesting i can already tell!
| Pleumeleuc chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
I love a good mystery in the first chapter. So, Bella never knew Charlie, hmm, I wonder if he was still her dad? And whose hands was she watching so closely?
So many questions, looking forward to next week for (hopefully) some answers.
| thia2 chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
Very intriguing...I like it! Seems like there are a few mysteries to uncover. And I like that it's a different premise, and different relationships between the characters than we normally see. Look forward to round 2!