Reviews for No Ordinary Life
huddyfan123 chapter 5 . 3/23/2011
omg please write more ur amazing... i cant wait to read more UPDATE
caiktin chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
You have a few spelling mistakes, and your writing style is slightly confusing to read. First your writing in first person and then in third. But you've got the right idea and you could go far with this, just make sure the spell check is your BFF. Good luck, and I like it so far (:

- Novallet34
JessikaWithA'K chapter 2 . 12/22/2010
okay i think this story is great... but wayyy to much dialogue 9speaking) little discription... u need some more... pow! lol... but seriously just a lil bit more effort

:),

Jessica
JustanItalianwriter chapter 3 . 11/27/2010
The story looks interesting, I can't wait for an update. You just need to work a little bit on you writing style, especially on grammar and punctuation. Maybe you can try to find a Beta Reader? Believe me, there's nothing better than a beta reader's help to improve your writing!