Reviews for Forever After |
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![]() ![]() A great story here! Really enjoyed reading it. The interactions and character work were well done and super convincing. Wonderful stuff. |
![]() ![]() Any chance you will come back to this? Please? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story so far, I guess, it's been a while since you updated |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwwww, yay! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwww. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Got us into what? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hard to believe he was the outcast. I just thought they were all lacking in brain power. That Viking thing causes them to hit first and never ask questions later. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Go Hiccup! It's a whole new world, now Hiccup's the leader and Stoic is the odd ball. |
![]() ![]() ![]() its really interesting and great |
![]() ![]() ![]() . This is one of the few stories I have read (the first Hiccstrid / Astriccup story) that REALLY got my heart just pounding! I was drinking coke, so the amazingly shaky hands could be from that but I'm pretty sure the squealing and hyena giggling and flapping-of-arms-like-a-trex but was the story. MOREMORE :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This fic is super awesome! I'm really enjoying it. I like that there's a lot of adventure in it, especially the idea of Hiccup and the rest of the gang becoming explorers. Very cool. I like how Astrid's not afraid to show her feelings in your story. I feel that a lot of times, in fanfiction, she's so stubborn and introverted that it gets annoying. It's nice to see a different approach. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow dont mess with Astrid, but we should all know that by now. Loved that part of this chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful chapter. It's about time Hiccup took it easy for a bit. Those hot springs sound very lovely too. I actually had to go back and read everything again (I read far too many fictions), and the whole story is still such a joy. Please keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() …Two words; BEST CHAPTER EVER! …wait... Astrid: that's three words, little miss smarty pants. Me: Shut up! *kicks her shin* Astrid: *unaffected* You. *points to me* Ax. *points to ax* Dead. Hiccup: Thats still three words. Astrid: How about… Me: *runs around in circles while running away from Astrid* UPDATE SOON! Astrid: Yeah that works. *throws ax at the ground, causing me to fall on my face* Me: OH IM HURT! I AM VERY MUCH HURT! Tuffnut: Hey that's my line! *kicks me in the stomach* Update soon, so I have something to look forward too after I go to the hospital! *clutches stomach* |
![]() ![]() ![]() cool story though you forgot "" which got a bit confusing... loving this story so far looking forward to more. |