Pretty nice chapter, but...where are your quotation marks?

This chapter has no quotations to separate the dialogue from the rest of the words.

Enjoying the story so far. Like the fact that the families had already decided that Astrid and Hiccup should be together. I also like how Hiccup will get 1 in 20 of everything that comes off the island. Very good way to work out how he will survive as he was injured and his size.

Wow Hiccup sure has some wisdom to impart. Not surprising the the Viking would be upset as their lives have just seen quite a change. I just would have hope they saw reason.

Kind of glad it stopped there. I need to stop reading and get to bed.

However, I appreciate the detail you're putting into this. The time periods as well. I can really believe they spent 3 months in almost complete darkness. LOVE it. It's a bit slow moving, but that doesn't bother me. :D Looking forward to more.

Hmmm...Sasquach? Good to see an update to this story!

i think this is truly great. i'm a fan of Astrid and i really like how you stuck with her as a follow on from the movie. I'd like to see how things evolve between her and Hiccup ;)

One small pointer, i don't know if Astrid would be as cool with Hiccup having kissed Ruff as you made her out to be...I know i'd be pretty damn annoyed, and I am no fiesty viking. I think maybe you should bring it up in another chapter as a jealousy thing that she may have to try and make Hiccup feel guilty about it, but make sure it all turns out okay in the end :)

I really can't wait for the next chapter, i love watching how other people's ideas progress, and i really like yours! I know you have a life an' all...but get on with chapter 10! I can't wait!

gold copper and diamonds all in one place, holy maceral

That was a very good story.

I think I may die of cuteness now *goes into coma* That was very sweet and wonderfully in character.

I enjoyed each of the chapters written so far for this story. They provide a reasonable and logical approach to an alternate universe, your 'what-if'.

I even managed to get a good laugh out of the story where Hiccup managed to tease Astrid. Yes, I could see where she would deck Hiccup after that and then turn around and ask for his forgiveness. You've managed to capture the spirit of all the characters presented in the movie.

Good luck and I look forward to the next chapters.

Best wishes.

THIS IS ! I LOVE IT CAN'T WAIT FOR CHAPTER 9 UPDATE SOON PLZ!.

WOW your an amazing writer and people say i'm a really good writer, i wrote Friends, Enemies, or Couple. and Through Perfect Eyes, and Love at First Hiccup. your really good i love this story, update soon.

Aw marriage for Hiccup and Astrid may been in the future -sighs-

I'm rather interested for what the volcano brings as well.

I'm really enjoying this story. I can't to find out what happens on the dragons island in the spring. As for this chapter, I said "Awwwww!" quite a bit! More please!