|Reviews for Dominoes|
| Starfire201 act. acct chapter 9 . 11/28/2010
It's not a bad story you have here. I do kind of like it. For concrit, I do have one thing to say: It would be a bit easier to understand what is going on if the scenes had dividers of some kind between them. As it is, it just looks like everything is running into each other, instead of being broken up into separate scenes.