Reviews for A Life Less Ordinary
Chilly Howdy chapter 1 . 9/3/2014
Hey Buff!

Someone rec'd your one shots on Twifictnators or what ever the site is called but I saw this one and it intrigued me!

Are you going to finish it?

I really hope so because like you said it's different to other stories :)

I can't wait to read more if you do!

Thanks for sharing this one

Chilly x
Amy80 chapter 1 . 12/16/2010


I didn't expect to cry. I think the reason I did was because it sounded to me like it was you talking, not Bella. Her words and her life sounded like yours, although of course I'm not sure if you get sexy with your hubby in the shower but I hope you do!

Your phrasing is lovely and gets better with everything you write, it's easy to read but compelling.

I'm very interested to see how this develops xxxx
jansails chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
You've certainly managed to create a cohesive, happy family unit, a solid marriage which has typical foibles but loving, trusting.

Tim was well defined, likeable.

Bella achieves a personal goal, a dream, on the same day she loses her beloved & the father of her children.

Grief for this family will be consuming & I doubt Bella & Tim's children would welcome any man into their mother''s life without quite a bit of time passing, like a year or more.

pixiekat7 chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
Buff Baby, this was more that a bit of wonderful! I smiled, sighed (& even saw some of myself in Bella) & finally I cried. I'm really looking forward to seeing how Bella

s story all plays out.

Thanks so much for writing & sharing.

Hugs until next time.

Azula Felinae chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
the beginning was so epic! and I loved the quote, I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter
MrsBiteMe chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
Just remember - #ithinkican #ithinkican - and you will get through this story. :)

You are wonderful, and I'm happy to beta anything you send my way.