Reviews for In Check
umbrella0326 chapter 1 . 9/23/2014
Awwwwww - THIS is how the show should've gone. Well done and well written.
myfirstloveseg chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
i loved it i've read in like 20 times all ready and its still fantastic
sabrine94 chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
really nice friend devolpment. i really wish this would happen in the show. kurt and dave are so meant to be :D
Sodomite Billings chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
If you have allowed your child to watch Glee, this is exactly what they think. Song after song is innuendo laced, with boys and girls mixing saliva and sweat with grown men and women. Gender is not an object on the show, for the laws of nature are bent over backward and sodomized by the wildest meth-laced cacophony of homosexual symphonies and moans that break the harmonic backbone of childhood innocence and decency.

Young boys are the primary target demographic of Glee. Instead of running lead with the football team or trying to court young ladies to socials, young men are being converted into limp-wrist belly dancers. The conquering moment of Glee last year was with Mexican actor Mario Lopez.

During the 1990s, there was a show named Saved By The Bell. It was filled with childish antics and Clinton-era perversion, but still decent enough for the older,discerning child to view.

On this show, AC Slater was the school’s “jock”, a muscle-bound lad whose taut body, dimples and corporate smile glistened on and off the field. Slater was the son of a Mexican immigrant, who atoned for his genetic sins and origins by joining the US military. Cleared of his father’s sins, Slater was able to become prominent in the high school. He befriended Zach Morris, the gold ‘every boy’ and found his way into American lifestyle and popularity with athleticism and good streaks of morality. He was not perfect, but was a character to who many immigrant-children could relate and learn that even they could make their way in our great society.

With all of this in mind, imagine the symbolism of taking this strong character — AC Slater — and using him as a weapon to destroy the minds and morality of many young men, especially Mexican-Americans still trying to fit into America’s stable definitions of fatherhood and masculine responsibility.

After the Glee episode now only referred to us the “Minstrel Mariachi” (a writer’s latent play on menstrual mariachi), we saw the definition of 90s machismo, AC Slater, reduced to a homsexual’s nightjollies about children.

Dressed like a Gothic sugar plum, corset copping a grip upon his turgid masculinity, only released by the laced ruffles of untied panties and garter stockings, this vision of homosexual fantasy ripped into the eye holes of millions of males nationwide. They saw the football jock had become the bedroom sock for gay fantasies. This forced many young men and even their fathers to question their sexuality.
Shu of the Wind chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
That was sweet. I'm not a DaveKurt romance fan, and probably never will be, but the possible friendship is there. And I really liked it.
thesoundofsunshine chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
I loved this. Oh, Karofsky has a weakness.. and Kurt's there to help him. This was adorable without having them get together. I don't think Karofsky deserved that much.. but I think they could have a wonderful friendship. This was amazing.

Caitlin(:
PowerLad chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
great story. i like the friendship starting here.
Dreaming-Of-A-Nightmare chapter 1 . 11/13/2010
OMG LOVE. seriously, that was lovely. *heart*
CaitrinMills chapter 1 . 11/11/2010
That's a good story and it's what I want to happen! Kurt and Blaine, but have Kurt help Dave the way Blaine helped/ is helping Kurt great story!
the darkness revealed chapter 1 . 11/11/2010
This was a big change from all the mean!Karofsky and traumatized!Kurt stories out there...and I loved it!
Change ne Norm chapter 1 . 11/11/2010
Ahh, that was adorable! Sometimes I wonder why fanfic writers can't just write the script to the actual show? It would be a whole lot more amusing.

This was so cute. I actually felt bad for Karofsky. Thanks for the read :)
jekyllhj7 chapter 1 . 11/11/2010
Awwww, really feeling for Dave and all of his inner conflict.

After watchign that scene a bazillion times, his little sqelched cry at the end is just heartbreaking. Even if he doesn't wind up with Kurt, I really hope there is some kind of understanding and/or support between them. I think Dave really needs it.
WeAreTomorrow chapter 1 . 11/11/2010
More,more, MORE!
XxRandomHeartxX chapter 1 . 11/11/2010
Aw. I really do hope they have a little heart-to-heart. I really think Karofsky just needs someone there. The same way that Kurt does. And now that Kurt has Blaine there to support him...I honestly just feel bad for Karofsky. And if they DO end up having a real talk like this, I'm hoping that it's as sweet as this one turned out to be. You did a really wonderful job :)
so2460done chapter 1 . 11/11/2010
That's very touching, I can deffinately see the violence coming from the resident Neanderthal :) very good
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