|Reviews for Porn Star Dancin'|
| thatonefangirl94 chapter 41 . 10/28/2014
Oh. My. GOSH! This story was incredible. My feels were all over the place! You are an extremely talented story teller. I was on the edge of my seat every second of reading this. My goodness! I'm just-WOW! Absolutely incredible. Thank you for writing this. Amazing! Seriously. Amazing!
| uk101 chapter 14 . 2/13/2014
AMAZING TWISTS im hooked argh cant stop reading this lol
| uk101 chapter 10 . 2/13/2014
hi there, ive just discovered your AMAZING story and i have to say WOW ive searched so long to find a story like this- somehting you can sink your teeth into, with real grit, a real story and characters so 3D they could be in the room with you- kudos!
i love a candy fic like all other fans out there, but this is in a freaking league of its own. could randy be any more perfect? ive fallen more in love with him that ever ;lol and cody- OMG coddles is too cute and sweet to ever be mad at. when he was talking to justin about the date i was begging him not to give up on randy, i loved the was justin would happily have been there for randy if cody jumped ship lmao.
i cant stop reading this its so god damn good.
you are one gifted writer ;)
| MorbidxAngelx chapter 1 . 12/22/2012
I already know just from reading this first chapter I'm gonna be obsessed with this story.
Beautifully descriptive and liking the teaser of the cast. Hope that maybe we see Evan as a stripper as well.
LOVING the entire Mob/Crime world scenario.
And wondering if its bad that when my mind processed Randy as a cop and Cody as a stripper my mind went immediately to Magic Mike? Picturing Randy in a cop outfit on stage?...
Again I already know I'm gonna love this.
| TerrorRoads chapter 41 . 2/25/2012
Holy...O.O it took me about a week to read this..always stayed up late till like 5 am in the morning ...Woah...great PLOT freaking loved it, it almost brought me to tears when Randy almost died Oh God .. and the ending...was soo unexpected O.O...but UGH Great story and I feel soo sad that I finished reading it :O...keep up the good work...I think I found myself a new favourite Author
| Justsayin chapter 41 . 12/21/2011
Damn this story is such a beast! The sequel will be even bigger I'm sure!
| tylerrbret chapter 41 . 11/22/2011
I don't have the words to express how wonderful this was to read. I was so impressed with your writing. It is completely amazing!
| DashingJetBlack chapter 41 . 8/26/2011
I have been working my way through this...One word...Wow. You are an awesome writer, I loved both your one-shot Codiasi fics A LOT but this was simply amazing. I don't often read AU or death fics but this was worth it - the way you write, the grittiness, the drama! The emotion you put into the narrative is always spot on. I was rooting for Randy and Cody to have a happy eneding...they were an awesome couple here and I'm not the biggest Candy fan! (prefer Centon and Codiasi XD)
If it wasn't for the familiar names this could stand alone as a pretty hot piece of original fiction!
| AnomieApex chapter 41 . 8/7/2011
Damn that whore!
No not Cody.
that sucks that the honeymoon is skipped and junped right into babies bc sam was too much of an idiot to not see shes preggers till 5 months(seriously that is like physically impossible in RL). then to not go for adoption after abortion was too late is just crazy! Bitch isnt exactly the baby type and what would have happ if randy was dead, take the thing in the fighter plane with ya, ha! stupid bitch.
and no make up sex! Guess r doesnt wanna go there with daveys cum still there. Actually Im kinda surprised you didnt mention anything abt cody getting cleared at a hospital t0o if only for diseases.
So in summary, moms a lieing bitch, sams a whore who cant tell shes preggers than leaves it in Rs lap as a welcome home present, and Randy is going to spend the rest of his ife behind a desk while Cody uses a medical degree to treat country hicks southern ills like in that new tv series that name escapes me.
God I love a traggic ending! :D
| Doorist -vyvrik chapter 41 . 8/7/2011
Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant, as every other chapter has been. I've loved this fic to bits from the very first word and have followed it diligently from go to whoah, jumping on every chapter and devouring it and love every bit cos it's fucking amazing. Regardless of everything else, I love it. It's been one heck of a ride and I look forward to whatever it is you post next. As always. I've always loved your work and I wish it was all here cos I used to reread it all the time, esp outlaw fic, fuck I loved that, and do you still have harmonyville posted anywhere cos I'd love to read that again. Just so good. Well done.
| TheStereotypicalShipper chapter 41 . 8/6/2011
*cries* awwwww! It's over. :-(! But every ending it just another beginning. :-). And I KNEW you were gonna have Randy have a surprise baby! There is no other surprise for a kan to find out he's a father. I hope that doesn't happen to me. XD! This was just a perfect ending! *bravo applause* You shouldve gotten more reviews if you ask me. I remember first reading this story about a third of a year ago. :-). I was captivated all the way. :-). Well, I can't wait to read what you have next. And I'd be happy to help if you need some ideas. XD! :-)! Well, until then...
Your faithful reader,
| LegacyChick chapter 41 . 8/6/2011
Oh wow. That's big news there. Moving in, getting married and then the biggest surprise... the baby. Shush. And their playful teasing is just too damn adorable. I just wish you'd continue this story, cause it's really thrilled me from the beginning to the end.
| YesTweedy chapter 30 . 8/6/2011
Ww, you can see how much effort you put into the story, it's bloody brilliant! Chapter 29 is my favourite (Y) Amazing story, keep up the good work :)
| LegacyChick chapter 40 . 7/29/2011
(I know that Vyvrik still reads the story ... just as a small addition)
Wow, what an ending. I'm sad about it, the story ending itself and how it ended, but I'm so glad I was part of the journey.
This was an amazing story. Your best so far if I may add.
From the plot to the writing, everything just fit perfectly together.
And now, damn, I wanna read that alternate ending. (Did you post it on LJ already?)
| AnomieApex chapter 40 . 7/28/2011
DING DONG ... EVERYBODY IS DEAD! LOL
Except the whore and the guy who was presumed dead, go figure.
So let me get this straight, there is going to be one more chap posted here set in the future( well the future of whoever is still alive), and an alternative dark future on your lj.
why! this is already darkness in all its glory, i highly doubt you can be flagged on here for an alternative.
screw other people. Just tell them the fic is for people who like rape, torture and murder, if they still read its their fault.
love is so pathetic compared the joys of raping and killing.
lol as a sidenote i gotta laugh at evs little part. Its like okay i gotta tie off loose ends like ev, Ill say hes FBI and leave it at that. lol I think you prob made it looser with all the questions that raises. ha!
otherwise this fic is about Randy the spineless dieing, and maybe hallucinating, really this chap got a little confusing in the description as I was like wtf!
lol at R reaching for love and falling flat on his face. in a hallucination anyway.
As a final note, I guess I have this Cat to thank for hunter killing wade and taking away randys promised vengance, HATE! Also I thought you didnt take any advice, help, spin offs, etc... lameness.
Anyway, thanks for the story and the sadism :)
P:S I found some use of a baseball bat, Jericho style, online if you want a looksee send me a PM and Ill send you some. ;)