Reviews for DogLady
qA chapter 1 . 2/20/2015
Jesus loves u the bible tells u so if u only look john 3:16 romans 10:9-10 1611 KJV praying 4 u in Jesus's name 4 his sake amen
Q chapter 1 . 12/23/2013
If you look closely, past the annoying caps and ridiculous spelling, you would see that this is just a rewrite of the movie 'Catwoman' and the author has turned it into a complete "parody". Stupid, not very original and downright obnoxious.
Spiral-Of-Fools chapter 1 . 6/20/2013
A lot of people are commenting on your poor writing skills, but honestly, as long as I can see what you're getting at and can fill in the pieces, I love it! I think it's funny and I can see what you're trying to say which makes it all the better. You certainly improve over the chapters, which is something I love to see! Great job! :)
Oompa-lumpa chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
Your writing needs a lot of work. Try starting with first grade skills and working your way up slowly. You need to work on your plots and flow
ladytroll chapter 10 . 7/21/2012
I like so many different writing styles but I think that you have a lot of work to do if you decide to continue writing. Good luck
May the games be ever in your favor
SailorSedna052 chapter 3 . 2/5/2012
Dude why did you make this chapter gross?
drivenbyrevenge chapter 10 . 4/29/2011
ohhh proposal! HAHA he fell down!


drivenbyrevenge chapter 9 . 2/2/2011
Oh I see what you did there. Bahahahahahaha. Nice. WTF, Lol.


PS ur writing is getting better, i'm in a rush so I'll give you proper feedback at school ;) so u tomorrooowww.
Are-You-Serious chapter 1 . 1/18/2011
Are you actually serious about writing a story? If so, correct grammar, like capital letters and punctuation, are direly needed! This is a badly written plot including a SuperHero who's name sounds like a brand of dog-poo-collecting bags! I beg of you, please to not continue to disgrace yourself like this! Choose a feasible plot with feasible characters, and try not to loose you dignity on the way!
drivenbyrevenge chapter 8 . 1/7/2011
lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol! XD getting better :)

drivenbyrevenge chapter 7 . 12/23/2010
dont worry bout not getting many reiews, in my 1st fic, i had to write about 8-10 chaps bfore i got a single one. story is going well.
drivenbyrevenge chapter 6 . 12/22/2010
yugioh buddies! lol.
Kairan1979 chapter 1 . 12/12/2010
Why don't you add Humor/Parody to Genre?
drivenbyrevenge chapter 5 . 12/1/2010
this iss your best chap yet, they're starting to get much funnier and better :D

drivenbyrevenge chapter 4 . 11/27/2010
o.o right... twilight *vomits*...
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